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    It's getting dark in here...

    It's getting darker in here...

    Some days, I can't see
    past the tip of my nose.
    Other days, I can't seem
    to go with the flow.

    There are times when I
    can't go on any further.
    Other times, I feel like a
    ghost--like I've been murdered.

    On the days when I feel
    like there's no point in trying,
    I argue with others, 'cause
    on the inside, I'm crying.

    On those days, I put my
    feelings away--they're in hiding.
    So, I seem like a prick, 'cause
    on the inside, I'm dying.

    It's getting to the point
    that I cannot see my path.
    The light has long since faded.
    No longer is it in my grasp.

    It's getting dark in here...

    Where? Well, I'll
    you'll know if you are smart.
    The place that is darkest I
    know of is right inside my heart.


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    Re: It's getting dark in here...

    Well it was rather depressing until the very end. Everyone else won't get it though because few know you like I do. And you have a good warm heart It's not dark it's beautiful and filled with shine. It's the outside things that cloud it up. Don't worry, you'll make it through.

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    Re: It's getting dark in here...

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    Well it was rather depressing until the very end. Everyone else won't get it though because few know you like I do. And you have a good warm heart It's not dark it's beautiful and filled with shine. It's the outside things that cloud it up. Don't worry, you'll make it through.

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    Thanks for thinking that I've got a good heart. I know that it usually is warm, but lately I've been feelin' different, which is why I wrote this. I don't know if it's depression, anger or just plain frustration, but I know that I don't feel like I used to about myself...


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    Re: It's getting dark in here...

    This is pretty deep
    the words have a nice flow and rhythm to them and they add character to the the poem
    Great job!!!!!
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    Re: It's getting dark in here...

    That's very sad, very lonely, even a bit dark. Good work.

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