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    its just a really short poem

    less of a poem more of a qoute now that i look at it.

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    eye to eye heart to heart, to the end we shall never part, i could never take part in the cruel crime of loving another as long as you are by myside. to the end and beyond my love shall remain yours. just like yours shall remain mine till the end of time. as the time drawls on, our two hearts beat as one, the creation of life and the end of ours.
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    Re: its just a really short poem

    Hmm 2 who do u adress this to..?

    a different type of poem now eh death ^^
    2 hearts joined as 1...thats something very rare 2 find...
    that poem said u will be true to 1..hmm..
    but i wont..i may get 2 or till 4 wives..

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    well its not directed to anyone... i dont have anyone, wish i did... but im just a loner. im glad you enjoyed it though!
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    i liked it. i think other people i know should read this peom . but yeah has a great moral refleaction.
    every rose has a thorn

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    Re: its just a really short poem

    Nice poem god of death! I like how you used your theme in the last line of the poem! "the creation of life and the end of ours." That's awesome! Keep up the good work bro!

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    Re: its just a really short poem

    Quote Originally Posted by BlueFox1 View Post
    Nice poem god of death! I like how you used your theme in the last line of the poem! "the creation of life and the end of ours." That's awesome! Keep up the good work bro!
    yea ill have to agree with u bluefox that was a good on do another one god of death!!!!!! or ill keep doin this lol
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    Re: its just a really short poem

    Quote Originally Posted by god of death View Post
    less of a poem more of a qoute now that i look at it.

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    eye to eye heart to heart, to the end we shall never part, i could never take part in the cruel crime of loving another as long as you are by myside. till the end of time. as the time drawls on, our two hearts beat as one, the creation of life and the end of ours.

    hey ... good job on this one ... it very loving
    no joke but its so sweet a person could use them as wedding vows
    i'm so serious
    "to the end and beyond my love shall remain yours. just like yours shall remain mine"
    shoot if I ever get married he better say something like that! lol
    I think you did great even if its "just a really short poem"
    =)

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    yeah thanks everyone!......geesh im just a hopless romantic! hehhehe
    thanks kimifemi.... wedding vows? hmmmm never thought about using that, but i have thought about using something along those lines in wedding vows. though it would reflect the love i have for that person.
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