Thread: its my fualt

I dunno, poems like this make me uncomfortable... But I did like it, up until it got to the "taking my life" part.

Originally Posted by leftinthedark

The fire in your eyes.
It kill's me knowing I put it there.
Your pain is my fualt.
Sorry is just a word that do's nothing.
Theres nothing i can do to fix it.
The only way to not cause you.
Any more pain.
Is to take my life.
It means so little to me.
You are all that matters.
So with this knife to my heart.
I will never bring you pain again.
by leftinthedark aka nicole!

I always hate to hear a break up. But then again its a learning experance. I like how you brought your poem together. I can understand when its says to "Is to take my life". I've been their and I can honestly say doen that dont' recommend doing it tho. I can't wait to read more of your poems.

verry good Poem Nicole. just try to be more positive alright? verry good though. I liked it a bit depressing I have to admit but I like it anyways.