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    It's slipping away

    It's slipping away from me,
    The hope in my heart and soul,
    The light that has burn in me has gone out,
    My eyes, once bright and alive,
    Now gone dark and cold,
    There's nothing left,
    An empty room with just a window,
    Watching the sun rise n set,
    The world is going by.

    I have lost my tears,
    I cant cry anymore,
    My eyes have gone cold dried it up,
    The darkness engulfs me,
    The light has gone out,
    The fire has died out,
    Hope has slipped away from me.
    I am alone and I've become the fallen angel.

    u know wut to do here...jus do it

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: It's slipping away

    wow...this is really good. i really like it, blade. wow...sounds like me. o.O

    Thankx Pyro, for this awesome sig! ^ ^




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    Re: It's slipping away

    to see the world through
    dying eyes is the way life
    sucks sometimes and to
    be so mad and uncaring that
    the tears just want flow
    and the only thing left is
    is your own thoughts
    to be left out or betrayed.
    thats what i got from this
    blade this was a awesome
    poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: It's slipping away

    thats awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!
    keep it up!!!!!
    maybe we can work together and write a few together.

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    Re: It's slipping away

    IT's a very nice poem love. Full of Emotion and it has fairly well rhyming. Great work, but arn't all your works wonderful ^^

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    Re: It's slipping away

    Nice. Sounds exactly like me when i was going through depression in my teen years. It really sucks that the only thing you can run to is paper. And the only one who will hold your hand in your pen that allows you to poor out the disease infecting everything, in you.

    Rock on with ur bad self!

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    Re: It's slipping away

    oh my god thats realy cool ant sad at the same time i near crying good work keep it up

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    Re: It's slipping away

    Jason this seems mean! (T__T) I hope you find the real you again!!

    I do like it thou. I just find myself commenting on this one.

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