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Reply With Quotewow...this is really good. i really like it, blade. wow...sounds like me. o.O
It's slipping away from me,
The hope in my heart and soul,
The light that has burn in me has gone out,
My eyes, once bright and alive,
Now gone dark and cold,
There's nothing left,
An empty room with just a window,
Watching the sun rise n set,
The world is going by.
I have lost my tears,
I cant cry anymore,
My eyes have gone cold dried it up,
The darkness engulfs me,
The light has gone out,
The fire has died out,
Hope has slipped away from me.
I am alone and I've become the fallen angel.
u know wut to do here...jus do it
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
wow...this is really good. i really like it, blade. wow...sounds like me. o.O
to see the world through
dying eyes is the way life
sucks sometimes and to
be so mad and uncaring that
the tears just want flow
and the only thing left is
is your own thoughts
to be left out or betrayed.
thats what i got from this
blade this was a awesome
poem
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
thats awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep it up!!!!!
maybe we can work together and write a few together.
IT's a very nice poem love. Full of Emotion and it has fairly well rhyming. Great work, but arn't all your works wonderful ^^
Nice. Sounds exactly like me when i was going through depression in my teen years. It really sucks that the only thing you can run to is paper. And the only one who will hold your hand in your pen that allows you to poor out the disease infecting everything, in you.
Rock on with ur bad self!
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
oh my god thats realy cool ant sad at the same time i near crying good work keep it up
Jason this seems mean! (T__T) I hope you find the real you again!!
I do like it thou. I just find myself commenting on this one.
||::. I like it Jason, and nothing needs to be changed .::||
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