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    AO's Demon Slayer Hexxagon Champion, Match Stick Soccer Champion Blade X may be famous one day Blade X may be famous one day Blade X's Avatar
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    Re: It's slipping away

    thanks guys for the comments....i jus wrote this wen ....well i was feeling down...and alone........jus glad there are friends like u guys around

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    Stray Sheep Aya-kun may be famous one day Aya-kun may be famous one day Aya-kun's Avatar
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    Re: It's slipping away

    blade-san~
    ^__^
    you're turning experience into a neat deep poem!
    that's good! it will help you get to know yourself better!
    then you can express your felings freely~
    gomen...
    im bad at understanding/commenting poems... =.=
    i shouldnt be here in the first place..
    baa
    gomen
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    Otaku The Fighter may be famous one day The Fighter may be famous one day The Fighter's Avatar
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    Re: It's slipping away

    Blade strikes again with yet another thrilling poem!! It seems like a sad poem packed with emotion! Thats why blades poems are always good to read.

    My eyes have gone cold dried it up,
    The darkness engulfs me,
    Whoa! Darkness is sufficating you! Great imagery! Look forward to your next work!

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