It's Strange

Its strange that we see everything so diffrently
Yet we grow closer still
Heatrs melding together
Making the two one

Its so odd to me
This feeling burning deep inside
Nothing I've felt before
But that I want so despretly to keep alive

But it burns deep within my body
Greater still my soul
Consuming every facet of my life
Taking hold of me and filling the void

Once I was the black sheep
Isolated, alone, and afraid
Its so hard to believe that I've found you for my home
My place to belong

There are times I truly wonder
Was I right to want you all to my self
I try my best to be unselfish
To share regardless of how I feel
By nature I'm not jealous
But I do feel a pain in my heart when you look away

Its almost sickening to feel this way
Worry every day
Restless every night
Wondering will this be the last time I hear your voice
Or feel the security of being in your arms

That's why I want to keep you all to myself
To know where you are
Question every tremor I feel
I'm not trying to smother you I promise
But its so hard to control myself

I have such a sixth sense about you
It almost scares me sometimes
Knowing when you're not quite yourself
When you're sick
Or when you've been harmed

You know me all too well
I'm almost envious
But I'm too astounded to feel a twinge of animosity towards you

You see right through me every time
Each little laugh and evey little whine
Nothing escapes your eyes
Your ears are sharper than anything I've ever seen
And your heart I admire most
Always so protective
Making me lose myslef every time

You inspire me to create
Make things that even I can find beautiful
Feel justice
Experience peace
Strange I always say
But from what I can tell
Love- it's just strange

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My goodness.......the words are so beautiful and insightful and full of troubled emotions..........
I think this is an amazing poem!!!

I agree quite beutifull but watch out for typo's they tend to sneek in. such as "trmor?" anyways also keep an eye on the lines of each stanza, you seem to switch between 3, 4 and 6 line stanzas. keep up the work Neves!

Very nice poem,It has allot emotion and i thought very touching.Hope you wright more like this one some time soon.Also like said before watch out for the typos Ill pm you about that,Thats about all i seen wrong with IMO.

Beautifully written. Yes, like mentioned a few posts above, watch out for some typos. Overall, super job. ^^