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    Its You

    Was it you that did this?
    That opened me to a new world
    What awaits for me?
    Why am I just standing here?


    You opened up my heart
    Gives me your kisses
    Told me sweet words
    Was it real or was it a dream?

    When you hold me in your arms
    I feel safe
    With the touch of your lips
    You seemed to brighten my world
    Your kindness has done so much
    I'm forever grateful
    Look you captured my heart

    A wish that came true
    When I made it upon a star
    When the breeze flows pass me
    A message seems to click
    A look up at the sky I see you

    When you hold me in your arms
    I feel safe
    With the touch of your lips

    You seemed to brighten my world
    Your kindness has done so much
    I'm forever grateful
    Look you captured my heart

    When you hold me in your arms

    I feel safe

    With the touch of your lips
    You seemed to brighten my world
    Your kindness has done so much
    I'm forever grateful
    Look you captured my heart
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    Re: Its You

    i like this its true romance that
    first kiss that keeps you floating
    on cloud 9 all day. it brings back awesome
    memories of my first kiss. anyway that what
    this pome reminds me of is my first kiss
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Its You

    That's interesting.... I like it and I think it's sweet^^
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Thank you.....................
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    Re: Its You

    You wrote this by yourself?
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: Its You

    Loooove It Girl!!!!!1 You Got Skillz!! I Write Poems But I Might Get Kicked Off If I Put One On!!
    FIGHTING EVIL BY MOONLIGHT!
    WINNING LOVE BY DAYLIGHT
    NEVER RUNNING FROM A REAL FIGHT,
    SHES THE ONE NAMED SAILORMOON

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    Re: Its You

    @adarrah -Yeah. It only took atleast a couple of minutes. The drama that happened with me made me want to write it

    @moongodess - thanks
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    Re: Its You

    you are really good. i wanna write like you but i cant make rtomantic poems. my vocabulary doesnt fit my age idf you get what im saying.
    FIGHTING EVIL BY MOONLIGHT!
    WINNING LOVE BY DAYLIGHT
    NEVER RUNNING FROM A REAL FIGHT,
    SHES THE ONE NAMED SAILORMOON

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