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    Lightbulb I've got an idea!

    Lets all leave someone, and date their best friend!
    It seems to be a fad now. A new upward trend.

    Find some poor fool. Get them to love you.
    Then see just how much shit you can put them through.

    But, make sure you don't love them... you can only pretend.
    Reserve all your REAL love for this poor fool's best friend.

    Leaving the mislead one, thats the fun part!
    You can see how they loved you... by the break in their heart.

    And they may never get over it! It may take them years.
    Just scoff at their heartache. Make light of their tears.

    Or better yet... let the poor fool be your spare.
    Because deep down, you know they ain't going nowhere.

    Make them think that perhaps there's a chance you will have them...

    There's pain in this poem... Not just sarcasm....
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: I've got an idea!

    Peach *sigh* I like the poem. It shows your anger and frstration, but we need to talk.
    You cant keep doing this

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    Re: I've got an idea!

    Quote Originally Posted by princesslady View Post
    Peach *sigh* I like the poem. It shows your anger and frstration, but we need to talk.
    You cant keep doing this
    I appreciate your feedback, and your concern... I really do.
    But I havent gotten into a whole bunch of detail with you because I really can't do a bunch of drama. I've seen you've been enquireing information from other parties too, and, that makes me a tad uncomfortable. I really just wanted your comment on my poem (not this one). As far me not being able to do "this" anymore... Thats nothing I don't tell myself everyday.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: I've got an idea!

    Aahh, this was a really sweet (as in the 90s sense of the word, meaning awesome) poem. I love the sarcastic tone... it's something you don't find every day in poems, and it's something pretty refreshing. There's a few typos, though, but they're minor details. The structure is nice, too, just like a "How-To" sorta thing. And princesslady is right, your anger and frustration really come clear through the poem... It feels like you could just yell this out at someone.

    I really enjoyed this. The intriguing structure, the unorthodox and underused tone, and the frustration and anger spilling out really made this shine, and made an otherwise clich├ęd topic (being scorned) fulfilling to read about.
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    Re: I've got an idea!

    Wow! Thank you!

    That was one of the best responses Ive had to a poem for a long time
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: I've got an idea!

    It was okay but if you cuss they well get all mad on here and give you bad things but you already know that but keep writing you well get better.

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    Re: I've got an idea!

    Quote Originally Posted by The GunGrave of Trigun View Post
    It was okay but if you cuss they well get all mad on here and give you bad things but you already know that but keep writing you well get better.
    You mean the MODS!?! Muhahahahahaaa

    I think as long as it is in good taste... and not overdone I'll be ok. But thank you for the heads up.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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