Thread: I've got an idea!

Peach *sigh* I like the poem. It shows your anger and frstration, but we need to talk.
You cant keep doing this

Originally Posted by princesslady

Peach *sigh* I like the poem. It shows your anger and frstration, but we need to talk.
You cant keep doing this

I appreciate your feedback, and your concern... I really do.
But I havent gotten into a whole bunch of detail with you because I really can't do a bunch of drama. I've seen you've been enquireing information from other parties too, and, that makes me a tad uncomfortable. I really just wanted your comment on my poem (not this one). As far me not being able to do "this" anymore... Thats nothing I don't tell myself everyday.

Aahh, this was a really sweet (as in the 90s sense of the word, meaning awesome) poem. I love the sarcastic tone... it's something you don't find every day in poems, and it's something pretty refreshing. There's a few typos, though, but they're minor details. The structure is nice, too, just like a "How-To" sorta thing. And princesslady is right, your anger and frustration really come clear through the poem... It feels like you could just yell this out at someone.

I really enjoyed this. The intriguing structure, the unorthodox and underused tone, and the frustration and anger spilling out really made this shine, and made an otherwise clichéd topic (being scorned) fulfilling to read about.

Wow! Thank you!

That was one of the best responses Ive had to a poem for a long time

It was okay but if you cuss they well get all mad on here and give you bad things but you already know that but keep writing you well get better.

Originally Posted by The GunGrave of Trigun

It was okay but if you cuss they well get all mad on here and give you bad things but you already know that but keep writing you well get better.

You mean the MODS!?! Muhahahahahaaa

I think as long as it is in good taste... and not overdone I'll be ok. But thank you for the heads up.