Thread: I've Lost Track

Wowz Punishment,

How on earth did you get the idea? It's not that long...not too short, easy to read and understand/follow, *applauses*

I love your idea on this poem, very different from others and nice to read.

hope you write more.

P.S...they're weren't any mistakes!!!



-Zainab

Originally Posted by ihauntforlust

Wowz Punishment,
How on earth did you get the idea? It's not that long...not too short, easy to read and understand/follow, *applauses*
I love your idea on this poem, very different from others and nice to read.
hope you write more.
P.S...they're weren't any mistakes!!!


-Zainab

Thanks! It just popped into my head and I jotted it directly onto the forum. I'm glad you liked it.

Yea, it sounds good. Nice flow to it. Makes you wonder that about the people that you hold close. Nice job. Can't wait for more.

Originally Posted by fireandice

Yea, it sounds good. Nice flow to it. Makes you wonder that about the people that you hold close. Nice job. Can't wait for more.

I appreciate your reviews. I do have a very close bond with certain people.

Very good work divine! I like the flow that comes off of it. I also agree with fire on her comment. can't wait to read more from you.

Originally Posted by ice viper

Very good work divine! I like the flow that comes off of it. I also agree with fire on her comment. can't wait to read more from you.

You'll be the first to know. I'm very grateful to have such good friends.

this is a very nice poem... all the question of those who are confused in love....

the methaphores sticks nicely..and the flow is good.. it's brilliant~! ^^