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    Jester/Joker

    The Ace of Hearts,
    A flick of the hand,
    People gasps in awe,
    A slide of the hand,
    The Queen of Hearts appears.

    In a burst of flames,
    Rose appears in the ashes,
    Presented to a woman of beautiful,
    A smile is present within the jester,
    Behind the masks he wears,
    He has fallen for her.

    The finale of the show,
    She is asked to assist the jester,
    With skilled hands he ties her up with himself,
    Death is the cost of the risk,
    The whirl of blade is drawing closer,
    Jester struggles against their bonds,
    But he asks her to place her life in his hands.

    She closes her eyes and accepts,
    The Jester steals a kiss from the angel,
    The audience screams the blade cuts through him,
    But the couple disappear in a puff of smoke.

    The crowd look on in awe and wonder,
    The drum rolls as the Jester and Queen of Hearts appear
    Taking off their masks and they bow,
    Bowing to the cheers and applauds,
    They hold hands,
    The mismatch, The joker and the Queen of Hearts.

    been awhile since i wrote anything, so i thought i try something with a card theme to it. enjoy people.

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    Re: Jester/Joker

    =O OH! Coolies.

    And hear I thought the queen would run away with the jester, or maybe a compares to the Jester and Joker, but this is not bad.

    -_- That stealing kiss should have got him hanged..

    @.@ Is Jason the Jester/Joker?
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    Re: Jester/Joker

    i guess this aint my best work......i see like the view:reply ratio is bad as well

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Jester/Joker

    Its because its long, and short poems make a easy reply and a easy post.

    And you didn't send out to friends to comment.

    =D silly!

    Its a good poem, some of your poems can be a bite boring, and with the use of Metaphors over and over maybe its hard to understand//...

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    Re: Jester/Joker

    *Nods* Awesome work! This really was pure imagination!
    Using a card theme. Who would thought of that >.> And the characters :evil: Very nicely written Jason ^^ I can't wait for more.

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    Re: Jester/Joker

    It's ok but it was quite hard to figure out myb it's just me lol i'm tired myb i should get some sleep keep trying hard mayb one day it will b good

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    well thats one ace poem love the theme as it reminds me of playing cards you must have a great imagination to think that up though like wow

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    Re: Jester/Joker

    Quote Originally Posted by Blade X View Post
    i guess this aint my best work......i see like the view:reply ratio is bad as well
    For me the problem was the naming... I couldn't believe someone could write a great work about cards... But here it is- Jester/Joker by Blade X.

    A great work!!! I really like it... it's not all about cards or tricks I feel. This poem made me think and made me get excited and made me imagine this show... wonderful.

    A really nice work!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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