Hey Bro this is a really deep poem and I can honestly related to the emotion of the poem! Outstanding job in my personal opinion!![]()
As i walk the path alone and see the thing
that fade away ,nothing but my self walks
this path as my journey carries me on, i discover
things about my self how life seems to always fail.
Life isn't all about me i know ,but at times
i wish it was because my journey of self discovery
is a cruel one ,i found that i don't care for life like
anyone else ,i enjoy the solidarity and the sadness
that comes from it.
People claim that I'm a fool ,and that i close my eyes to
things around me all i can say is that i am sorry but this
is my life and it suits me fine. i smile as walk down my path
as my self discovery opens more doors for me ,nothing i can
say or do will make you say you miss me too, and i am fine with that.
Soon my journey ends and I'm alone not once did i ask for
a hand and never did i receive it because of how life is
i fade away as i smile to my self thinking self discovery is a
what makes me right.
this poem is about those who go on quests or journey's of
self discover about life and how things have to be or why
no 2 answers are the same when they find what they want
but they do realize that other around them change ,or at least
they view them differently once they find the answer they took the
journey to find because they felt the need to question the faith or
how people see them. i would go on but this a poem any comment or
suggestion is welcomed
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Hey Bro this is a really deep poem and I can honestly related to the emotion of the poem! Outstanding job in my personal opinion!![]()
thanks bro i am glad you liked it and its cool you can relate
and once you find your inner self things becme so clear that
nothing is eer the same no matter how much you want them
to be like they were.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
That was wonderful as always big bro!!! Me and my cuz just loved it!!! Amazing job as always!!!![]()
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
that was a very good poem and it made so much sense. I'm sure alot of people have felt that way. I can't wait to read your next one.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
I like this one better then your last poem. You don't put anyone down like you did in your last poem. Life is a journey, self discovery takes a while you may never know what you discover even to the end. I hope if this poem was for you also that you have good luck on finding yourself!
Bookmarks