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| King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,212 | A Journey Of Self Discovery! As i walk the path alone and see the thing that fade away ,nothing but my self walks this path as my journey carries me on, i discover things about my self how life seems to always fail. Life isn't all about me i know ,but at times i wish it was because my journey of self discovery is a cruel one ,i found that i don't care for life like anyone else ,i enjoy the solidarity and the sadness that comes from it. People claim that I'm a fool ,and that i close my eyes to things around me all i can say is that i am sorry but this is my life and it suits me fine. i smile as walk down my path as my self discovery opens more doors for me ,nothing i can say or do will make you say you miss me too, and i am fine with that. Soon my journey ends and I'm alone not once did i ask for a hand and never did i receive it because of how life is i fade away as i smile to my self thinking self discovery is a what makes me right. this poem is about those who go on quests or journey's of self discover about life and how things have to be or why no 2 answers are the same when they find what they want but they do realize that other around them change ,or at least they view them differently once they find the answer they took the journey to find because they felt the need to question the faith or how people see them. i would go on but this a poem any comment or suggestion is welcomed |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,176 | Re: A Journey Of Self Discovery! Hey Bro this is a really deep poem and I can honestly related to the emotion of the poem! Outstanding job in my personal opinion!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,212 | Re: A Journey Of Self Discovery! thanks bro i am glad you liked it and its cool you can relate and once you find your inner self things becme so clear that nothing is eer the same no matter how much you want them to be like they were. |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,351 | Re: A Journey Of Self Discovery! That was wonderful as always big bro!!! Me and my cuz just loved it!!! Amazing job as always!!! ![]()
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,336 | Re: A Journey Of Self Discovery! that was a very good poem and it made so much sense. I'm sure alot of people have felt that way. I can't wait to read your next one.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 5,059 | Re: A Journey Of Self Discovery! I like this one better then your last poem. You don't put anyone down like you did in your last poem. Life is a journey, self discovery takes a while you may never know what you discover even to the end. I hope if this poem was for you also that you have good luck on finding yourself! |
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