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    Re: The Joy of help

    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post


    You let your friends know,
    And they become happy you found it.
    After all you did you made your friend happy,
    Which in turn made you happy.
    I acually like this part of your poem Ichigo. It reminds me of how you helped my out and in return I help you out. The flow of the poem could be better but all in all I do like your poem. Keep up with the good work.

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    Re: The Joy of help

    Thank you all of you for your imput I will be sure to do a better job next time, I thought it wasnt that great but it looks like I was wrong, well Iwill post soon I already have one ready.
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    Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173

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