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Old Nov 08, 2007, 12:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Jump the gun.

Jump the gun.
Because Simply,
I want to run.
So please.
So Jump the gun.

Force my hand.
Because indecision is easier.
I don't want the choice.
Make it for me.
So Force my hand.

Keep making accusations.
Make me feel like I'm talking to him.
From long long ago.
Leading you on.
Telling likes.
So Keep making accusations.

Make up my mind for me.
Lifes easier when some one does.
The pressures off.
So is the responcibility.
It's much easier to act.
So Please,make up my mind for me.
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Old Nov 08, 2007, 03:23 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Jump the gun.

Really, really nice.......I love the unique rhythm in this poem
Great job!!!!!
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Old Nov 08, 2007, 06:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Jump the gun.

oh yes... the rhythm was awesome... i liked it too..

hmm...jump the gun.. is this something like..pull the trigger? @.@

Creative work.. nicely done.. ^^ keep it up..
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Old Nov 09, 2007, 07:04 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Jump the gun.

I was kinda pleased with this poem. It was a new exorsize in writing for me. I made them progressively longer. I'm glad you all liked it.
And no. Jumpping the gun is an expression like counting your chickens before their hatched, making hasty decisions before you have all the facts.
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Old Nov 09, 2007, 09:46 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Jump the gun.

Force my hand.
Because indecision is easier.
I don't want the choice.
Make it for me.
So Force my hand.

Great part i loved it! it was great! that wad my fav part because I cant make descions my self either very easily, and i hate choosing!
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I was kinda pleased with this poem. It was a new exorsize in writing for me. I made them progressively longer. I'm glad you all liked it.
And no. Jumpping the gun is an expression like counting your chickens before their hatched, making hasty decisions before you have all the facts.
yes that is a round about way of saying "quite making assumptions" you know the word assuming is making an ass out of you and me right? lol just kidding come on brat chear up will yeah.
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Keep making accusations.
Make me feel like I'm talking to him.
From long long ago.
Leading you on.
Telling likes.
So Keep making accusations.
I think you mean lies in this one.
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Old Nov 09, 2007, 10:30 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Force my hand.
Because indecision is easier.
I don't want the choice.
Make it for me.
So Force my hand.

Great part i loved it! it was great! that wad my fav part because I cant make descions my self either very easily, and i hate choosing!
Yeah...it sucks. I hate choosing too. Especially when someone loses no matter what. Like me.
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yes that is a round about way of saying "quite making assumptions" you know the word assuming is making an ass out of you and me right? lol just kidding come on brat chear up will yeah.

I think you mean lies in this one.
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I did mean lies. Thanks for pointing that out. when i'm not so lazy I'll have to fix that.
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not a problem brat always glad to help anytime I can
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