Jump the gun.

bratling · Nov 08, 2007, 12:57 PM

Jump the gun.
Because Simply,
I want to run.
So please.
So Jump the gun.

Force my hand.
Because indecision is easier.
I don't want the choice.
Make it for me.
So Force my hand.

Keep making accusations.
Make me feel like I'm talking to him.
From long long ago.
Leading you on.
Telling likes.
So Keep making accusations.

Make up my mind for me.
Lifes easier when some one does.
The pressures off.
So is the responcibility.
It's much easier to act.
So Please,make up my mind for me.

Astaroth · Nov 08, 2007, 03:23 PM

Really, really nice.......I love the unique rhythm in this poem
Great job!!!!!

*RayMe* · Nov 08, 2007, 06:39 PM

oh yes... the rhythm was awesome... i liked it too..

hmm...jump the gun.. is this something like..pull the trigger? @.@

Creative work.. nicely done.. ^^ keep it up..

bratling · Nov 09, 2007, 07:04 AM

I was kinda pleased with this poem. It was a new exorsize in writing for me. I made them progressively longer. I'm glad you all liked it.
And no. Jumpping the gun is an expression like counting your chickens before their hatched, making hasty decisions before you have all the facts.

highteckdudu · Nov 09, 2007, 09:46 AM

Force my hand.
Because indecision is easier.
I don't want the choice.
Make it for me.
So Force my hand.

Great part i loved it! it was great! that wad my fav part because I cant make descions my self either very easily, and i hate choosing!

Ichigo_06 · Nov 09, 2007, 09:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bratling

I was kinda pleased with this poem. It was a new exorsize in writing for me. I made them progressively longer. I'm glad you all liked it.
And no. Jumpping the gun is an expression like counting your chickens before their hatched, making hasty decisions before you have all the facts.

yes that is a round about way of saying "quite making assumptions" you know the word assuming is making an ass out of you and me right? lol just kidding come on brat chear up will yeah.

Quote:

Originally Posted by bratling

Keep making accusations.
Make me feel like I'm talking to him.
From long long ago.
Leading you on.
Telling likes.
So Keep making accusations.

I think you mean lies in this one.
Munchabunchacrunchamuncha

bratling · Nov 09, 2007, 10:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by highteckdudu

Force my hand.
Because indecision is easier.
I don't want the choice.
Make it for me.
So Force my hand.

Great part i loved it! it was great! that wad my fav part because I cant make descions my self either very easily, and i hate choosing!

Yeah...it sucks.

I hate choosing too. Especially when someone loses no matter what. Like me.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ichigo_06

yes that is a round about way of saying "quite making assumptions" you know the word assuming is making an ass out of you and me right? lol just kidding come on brat chear up will yeah.

I think you mean lies in this one.
Munchabunchacrunchamuncha

I did mean lies. Thanks for pointing that out. when i'm not so lazy I'll have to fix that.

Ichigo_06 · Nov 09, 2007, 10:45 AM

not a problem brat always glad to help anytime I can

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bratling Devoted Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 11,945	Jump the gun. Jump the gun. Because Simply, I want to run. So please. So Jump the gun. Force my hand. Because indecision is easier. I don't want the choice. Make it for me. So Force my hand. Keep making accusations. Make me feel like I'm talking to him. From long long ago. Leading you on. Telling likes. So Keep making accusations. Make up my mind for me. Lifes easier when some one does. The pressures off. So is the responcibility. It's much easier to act. So Please,make up my mind for me. __________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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Astaroth Chtonian Slayer Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know Posts: 563 Thanks: 23 Thanked 47 Times in 45 Posts Credits: 31,449	Re: Jump the gun. Really, really nice.......I love the unique rhythm in this poem Great job!!!!! __________________ DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
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bratling Devoted Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 11,945	Re: Jump the gun. I was kinda pleased with this poem. It was a new exorsize in writing for me. I made them progressively longer. I'm glad you all liked it. And no. Jumpping the gun is an expression like counting your chickens before their hatched, making hasty decisions before you have all the facts. __________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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