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  1. Nov 08, 2007 12:57 PM #1
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    Jump the gun.

    Jump the gun.
    Because Simply,
    I want to run.
    So please.
    So Jump the gun.

    Force my hand.
    Because indecision is easier.
    I don't want the choice.
    Make it for me.
    So Force my hand.

    Keep making accusations.
    Make me feel like I'm talking to him.
    From long long ago.
    Leading you on.
    Telling likes.
    So Keep making accusations.

    Make up my mind for me.
    Lifes easier when some one does.
    The pressures off.
    So is the responcibility.
    It's much easier to act.
    So Please,make up my mind for me.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
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    Re: Jump the gun.

    Really, really nice.......I love the unique rhythm in this poem
    Great job!!!!!
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    Re: Jump the gun.

    oh yes... the rhythm was awesome... i liked it too..

    hmm...jump the gun.. is this something like..pull the trigger? @.@

    Creative work.. nicely done.. ^^ keep it up..
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  4. Nov 09, 2007 07:04 AM #4
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    Re: Jump the gun.

    I was kinda pleased with this poem. It was a new exorsize in writing for me. I made them progressively longer. I'm glad you all liked it.
    And no. Jumpping the gun is an expression like counting your chickens before their hatched, making hasty decisions before you have all the facts.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
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    Re: Jump the gun.

    Force my hand.
    Because indecision is easier.
    I don't want the choice.
    Make it for me.
    So Force my hand.

    Great part i loved it! it was great! that wad my fav part because I cant make descions my self either very easily, and i hate choosing!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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  6. Nov 09, 2007 09:51 AM #6
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    Re: Jump the gun.

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    I was kinda pleased with this poem. It was a new exorsize in writing for me. I made them progressively longer. I'm glad you all liked it.
    And no. Jumpping the gun is an expression like counting your chickens before their hatched, making hasty decisions before you have all the facts.
    yes that is a round about way of saying "quite making assumptions" you know the word assuming is making an ass out of you and me right? lol just kidding come on brat chear up will yeah.
    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    Keep making accusations.
    Make me feel like I'm talking to him.
    From long long ago.
    Leading you on.
    Telling likes.
    So Keep making accusations.
    I think you mean lies in this one.
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    Re: Jump the gun.

    Quote Originally Posted by highteckdudu View Post
    Force my hand.
    Because indecision is easier.
    I don't want the choice.
    Make it for me.
    So Force my hand.

    Great part i loved it! it was great! that wad my fav part because I cant make descions my self either very easily, and i hate choosing!
    Yeah...it sucks. I hate choosing too. Especially when someone loses no matter what. Like me.
    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    yes that is a round about way of saying "quite making assumptions" you know the word assuming is making an ass out of you and me right? lol just kidding come on brat chear up will yeah.

    I think you mean lies in this one.
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    I did mean lies. Thanks for pointing that out. when i'm not so lazy I'll have to fix that.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
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  8. Nov 09, 2007 10:45 AM #8
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    Re: Jump the gun.

    not a problem brat always glad to help anytime I can
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