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Reply With QuoteIt is unique indeed.
I like it,it show alot of feeling towards the girl^^
Just a whore
She's not my girl
But she loves like she is
Greets me with a smile
I lead her into my room
As she gets ready
To stay for a while
I examine her body
Flaws, non-existent
As she lays on my bed
Just like a human
She kisses my lips
The lie is easily read
She's not my girl
And she's not human
But I do know what she is
She's just a whore
And nothing more
Who can lie through a kiss
Late that night
I call her again
Somewhat miss that sin
The phone clicks by accident
I can hear the whore
Once again with him
I kind of like this poem
It's unique.
It has a different feel.
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It is unique indeed.
I like it,it show alot of feeling towards the girl^^
Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
nice i like it.
it has alot of meaning towards it.
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It is a unique poem!!!! Very unique!!!! I love how you wrote and say who this girl is!!!! To me it seems so deep in a way! I love it! I hope to see more!
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Wow! I thought this was very good... very very good.
It was relentless... just bluntly calling the girl a whore! And still, you do your business with her... knowing shes a whore! You don't even give her the luxery of humanity, like a whore is less than human...
The best part, is that you never fall into her illusion... Its more like she falls into yours...
Last edited by Peach_follows; Jul 17, 2007 at 01:38 PM.
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