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    Post Another Poem You'll Never Read

    I don't want to write another line.
    I'd really hate to spew another verse.
    I always seem to type with you in mind.
    Perhaps thats why I cannot lift this curse.

    I don't want to sketch my misery.
    Or write my heart out until my fingers bleed.
    Another picture that you'll never see.
    Another f*cking poem you'll never read.

    You don't want my drama anymore.
    Looking back on it, I bet you never did.
    I feel too much inside, for me to store.
    Can't stuff it all in, or close the lid.

    I don't want to cry another drop,
    Anytime your face enters my brain.
    I think of you, and somehow I cant stop.
    I can't escape the mention of your name.

    Don't wanna be a player in your show.
    A fighter, in a war I know I'm losing.
    I don't want to throw another blow,
    'Cause I'm the one who always ends up bruising.

    Sometimes I feel my sanity is gone.
    You cloud my mind with a heavy fog.
    I don't want to hear another song.
    Update a journal. Type another blog.

    I don't want to paint another canvass.
    I can never seem to create something new.
    All I do is wallow in my sadness.
    Somethings missing, and I know its you.

    I don't want to write another line....
    ...
    ...
    ...
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    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Just Another Poem

    Awww
    What happened to the happy poems? I like it. It's interesting, and i wonder if it is based on a person? Because to me it just seemed that you're tired of writing poems ^^;

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    Re: Just Another Poem

    Finally, a poem that has some development and potential. the first stanza made me smile a bit. Nice flow.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Just Another Poem

    WOW, the fifth version sounded awesome, and this poem couldn't made Kasai smile lol, I hope to read more of your work.

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    Re: Just Another Poem

    wow this was a good poem. I really like it.You have a nice flow and it rhymed. lol. I hope to see more of your work. (^.^)

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