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Reply With Quote@.@ hmm...a good intention poem but theres so many grammatical mistakes
well if there a lesser... ^^ it would be a much better poem and more enjoyable to read... and do your best next time ok ~! ^^
As I lay here in the deep forest
Listening to the birds sing
Playing a song of harmony
Wishing the world could see
What it has become
Over the long years
It's turned evil
With no one to help
So many murders
Happen too recently
People are turning
Into what they used to loath
The world provides
But all we do is take
We never give anything
But pain and sorrow
But there are some people
Who have pure souls
Who can restore the world
To what it used to be
But that's turning into
Just a long forgoten dream
I shead a single tear knowing
That the world might never change
So I still lay here in the forest
Playing my song
Wishing, just wishing
That it was all just a dream....
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@.@ hmm...a good intention poem but theres so many grammatical mistakes
well if there a lesser... ^^ it would be a much better poem and more enjoyable to read... and do your best next time ok ~! ^^
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TT_TT like whaaaat?? What's wrong with it and what grammer mistakes please help me out cause I'm confused and sad!!!!@.@ TT_TT
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Awww.....don't feel bad! I loved it ok! I loved it cause it just remind me of my dreaming and it was just great to read! So it was lovely so I hope to see more!Originally Posted by Akura13
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
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