just a dream
looking out as the snow flakes fall
its just so very bright
the sight it is just so pretty
when i'm out it would catch my sight
looking out as the sight catches my breath
just so cold yet a warm feeling
freezing on the outside but warm inside
then you come to mind.. waz this i'm hearing?
as the wind blows i hear your voice
whispering into my ear
as i stand here and listen
you would say, "i wish you were here"
then i wake up saying, "it was just a dream"
couldn't fall back asleep didn't know what to do
then hearing my phone ring
happy seeing it was you
Re: just a dream
good work...make it more romance...
what i trying to say is the word you using must be suitable...
over all...nice...keep it up...