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    Just for fun. lol

    I drive across the finish line
    Don't even see the stop sign
    In my rear view mirror I see the lights shine
    Dang! I am going to get anther fine

    I was very bored when I wrote this I hope you get at lest a little humor out of it And as always any constructive criticism is welcome, for I am trying to learn all I can.
    Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
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    Re: Just for fun. lol

    lol i love that one..... it funnie............................................ ......

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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    Re: Just for fun. lol

    I love this!! I actually really love it! lol, it shows humor, as well as imagination.! Well done! -bows- I enjoyed reading this!!

    Living life on your own..Isn't always that easy..-Vincent

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    Re: Just for fun. lol

    LMAO! your poem is the funnest one i ever read. Lots of poeple more then likely experienced that. I know my dad had.

    A Soul Needs a Purpose to Live.- Gaara

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    Re: Just for fun. lol

    I still can't enough of this poem!! I just love it so much!! -smiles- Make another!!

    Living life on your own..Isn't always that easy..-Vincent

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