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    just a little poem I came up with

    Roses are red,
    Violet are blue.
    I love you,
    Do you love me too?

    Blood is crimson,
    Tears are clear.
    Do you remember,
    This time of year?

    The snow is beautiful,
    But also so cold.
    And I remember,
    Who I love to hold.

    And now I hate,
    This time of year.
    Because now your gone,
    And no one is near.

    I wish that I,
    Could stop this cruel fate.
    But now your gone,
    And I was to late.

    It's ok though,
    My scars will heal.
    And sometimes,
    I'll have to deal.

    I missed you so much,
    You are so late.
    And it's hard to believe,
    Your filled with such hate.

    Roses are red,
    Violets are blue.
    Lets runaway.
    Because I love you.

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    Re: just a little poem I came up with

    A nice poem, very cool... you've managed to put a lot of sence and sadness in a poem that should be ment to be just lovely... Great work with that... surprised me a lill bit, I was sure it'll be one hell of a salty poem when i read the first stranza but it came out to be pretty cool

    Good work! ^^ I'll be looking forward to something more ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: just a little poem I came up with

    This is good! ^_^

    You did well with the rhyming and your choice of words was great. Good job!

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