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    Just Me The Blood And The Floor

    Screams of anguish, haunting cries
    Life of endless futile tries
    Right or wrong totally blurred
    Emotion, a meaningless word.

    Lost hope, forgotten light
    Only desperation and no respite.
    Cold, dreary never ending night
    Presented with the devil's cite.

    Drowning in silence
    A scarred conscience.
    Raging war, lost battle
    Broken heart, only mortal.

    Crushed wings smeared in blood
    A constant fight, his favourite hunt
    Bartered soul, not my possession
    Best ally to Cain's vengeance.

    Masks of stone
    Lies unfold
    Bitter truth
    A Lost youth

    Hatred burning
    Time aging
    Lost in a maze
    No lights ablaze.

    No water, wind even rain
    Prayers, just too inane
    Forgotten love, not in sight
    Closed doors at midnight

    Mind numbing pain
    A life, already slain
    Dreams all a crumble
    Coldness an eternal lover

    Broken thoughts, lost mind
    Will to live just resigned.
    True loneliness the only friend
    Happiness, just pretend.

    Fantasy creatures, blind eyes
    Perfect beauty's pure demise.
    Face less moon, dark clouds,
    Death and misery together vowed.

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    Re: Just Me The Blood And The Floor

    Broken thoughts, lost mind
    Will to live just resigned.
    True loneliness the only friend
    Happiness, just pretend.
    Another good dark write. ^_^ I LOVE IT!!! ^_^ I quoted my favorite stanza... The last two lines of it are my favorite. I've used similar ones in poems I've written before. Keep up the good work!

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Re: Just Me The Blood And The Floor

    Quote Originally Posted by Darkened_Star View Post
    Another good dark write. ^_^ I LOVE IT!!! ^_^ I quoted my favorite stanza... The last two lines of it are my favorite. I've used similar ones in poems I've written before. Keep up the good work!
    these are just about the way I feel....but either way Poetry I like so I do keep it up

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    Re: Just Me The Blood And The Floor

    Please do not spam the forums with your poems. As per the rules, you can only submit 4 thread per day. I will be sending out an infraction, and close your existing poems that have been posted after your first 4 since yesterday.

    To quote the rules:

    Members are restricted to start no more than 4 threads a day. Please do not flood the forum with excessive, useless posting.
    Closing...

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