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    Just one(my freind Shelby wrote this so I'm posting it for her)

    Just one cut,
    Just one slice,
    My razor is my secret device.

    My mom will never know,
    My dad just doesn't care,
    The hoodies and long sleeves are all that I wear.

    When I'm pissed,
    It's just what I do.
    And NO! I don't care if that bothers you!

    It's just like crying...
    Without sheding a tear.
    Telling my life story is exactly what I fear.

    You can see it in my eyes..
    It's present on my face..
    Sadness and depression linger everyplace.

    Good times in my life..
    Are very, very rare.
    Most girls my age only care about shoes, boys, and hair.

    If you want to hear my story..
    Well, you better listen up!
    If you don't like it..that's just tough!

    My dad..
    That belt..
    You have NO idea how it felt!

    He'd grab my arm,
    And pull my hair..
    I'd see that belt fly through the air
    That belt would hit me,
    I would scream,
    How could a person be so mean?

    He would always hit me..
    I would always shout.
    See? You had no clue what my life is about!

    It's true..
    He doesn't do it anymore,
    But my heart and soul are still pretty sore.

    Never knowing what I did..
    It hurts so bad, you see..
    Knowing that he could do all of that, so easily, to me.

    Never a "Sorry".
    Not one little tear..
    All he ever gave me was a heart full of fear.

    Don't tell me not to cut!
    I know how bad it is!
    But now you know why I'm doing this..

    It's not for attention,
    It's not for guilt,
    It's not my fault that my blood just spilt..

    Just one cut,
    Just one slice,
    My razor is a necessary device!

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    Re: Just one(my freind Shelby wrote this so I'm posting it for her)

    wow. very good, and discriptive! and also very emo! ^.^ i hope thats not what actually happended to her...
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    Re: Just one(my freind Shelby wrote this so I'm posting it for her)

    Very interesting and descriptive poem. It made me image this girl really going though that. My dad used to take the belt to me,but he was never cruel to me like that girl's dad was to her. No child should be treated that way. Great job and I look forward to reading your next one.
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    Re: Just one(my freind Shelby wrote this so I'm posting it for her)

    Whoa ur friend is talented too...
    lol

    sheesh i think the same too aqua chic

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    Re: Just one(my freind Shelby wrote this so I'm posting it for her)

    Shelby is happy that you guys like her poem.
    I gave her 4 pictures to choose from my personal pictures and she pick the one you see under the poem.
    and she says thanks for the comments.

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    Re: Just one(my freind Shelby wrote this so I'm posting it for her)

    that pic really goes with the poem... good choice ^^
    but thats not my type of chick

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