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    just a poem

    My burning passion
    My dripping desire
    Flood my heart
    To never expire

    They proceed to follow through
    To split my being into two
    Exceeding the limited space provided
    The person i used to know is now divided

    Two seperate entities
    Entangled in different destinies
    Never to cross the other
    Shall they do than I they smother
    Why is everything so ****ing hard for me? Keep me down to what you think I should be! Must you tempt me and provoke the ministry? Keep on trying I'm not dying so easily!

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    Re: just a poem

    once again very good poem but way to short


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    Re: just a poem

    good poem, and never is there a too short poem.

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    Re: just a poem

    Quote Originally Posted by N!tr0-Glyc3r1n View Post
    once again very good poem but way to short
    well is longer than the other 3 its cool to me but it should have 5 estrofas.



    perdoname michelle!

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