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    Unhappy Just something I wrote once...

    This poem has nothing to do with anyone I know, nor is it about me.

    "Bang"
    Crying through the night
    Screaming until daylight
    Wandering in a panicked state
    Filling up with rage and hate
    Clicks heard from behind a door
    A band, and her sorrow is no more

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    Re: Just something I wrote once...

    Just gotta fix that little type-o because I totally envisioned a hardcore punk band... doing some sort of sound check (clicking noises) behind a door.

    Once I gathered it was an error though I appreciated the grim topic a little more. Good work.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Just something I wrote once...

    Nice poem. You didn't go too long and made a significant impact on the reader. Well done plus the rhyme scheme was very consistent.

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