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    Just A World


    I never knew how the hell I got here
    In a place that lost it's pureness
    A home that was crumbling under the people's desires
    In A world built on lies and pain
    A sad vision that was turned into reality
    A sorrowful dream that was turned into the path I walked in
    Each time I saw my self in the mirror
    I saw a shallow, fading face
    A face that belonged to no-one
    I tried to sit here enduring the time
    If only the time would have ended quickly
    The time that seemed to stretch each time it was about to end
    As if the fading life was turned into eternity
    Just to hurt a person
    A person which was me
    I knew
    I knew
    The versus
    The prophecies
    And the curses
    I knew the things thatwere decided
    Along time ago before I was even there
    And since I came here
    I got lost between the sounds
    I got lost between the people
    I knew how it felt to live in sorrow
    I knew pain even in my sleep
    My eyes that saw the beauty of this world
    Turned with out delay into the ugliness of this tragic world
    A view so scary
    That
    My body started shaking
    My eyes could not close
    The true way the world was
    Scary, frightening and...and ..and....
    So surprising, I couldn't describe the world that I was born in
    A world turned into darkness by those hands
    The world that was held between those hands turned into dust
    The world that me and my friends struggled to build turned into ashes
    That ugly world
    That surprisingly held the very beauty of this world
    Each time I lift my eyes to see the sky
    So high with nothing to hold it
    The moon that was so wonderful
    Just like a painting in the sky
    The air that felt nicely drawn to sweetness
    I wonder...
    How can an ugly world
    Could be so beautiful
    I wished the places would become like this
    Without me feeling so shallow
    Now
    I could sing I new song
    A song
    That will reunite me
    Reunite me with what was dear
    And the thing I mostly keep near
    Reunite me with what I have lost a long time ago
    Reunite with my life
    And reunite me with my friends, my family and my love that I have forgotten
    The world isn't as shallow as I saw it
    This place is filled with the things
    That keeps this world beautiful
    A world that gives hope
    A world to cure all scares
    And to help me see today
    And a happy tomorrow
    A day with some one I love
    A world I dream of…
    A world for me and my friends…
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    Re: Just A World

    A world that gives hope
    A world to cure all scares
    And to help me see today
    And a happy tomorrow
    A day with some one I love
    A world I dream of…
    A world for me and my friends…


    i liked this part becuase its true eberyone wiches
    for a world where they could regain the things they
    lost but to many times it dosnt happen and in reality
    it never happens just in fantasy. your point was made really
    clear about this i think. this is what i got from this poem
    it was awesome
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Yet another I like by ya! Another 10!
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