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    K.O.ed

    Bobbing and weaving,
    The emotional blows.
    Dancing and pracing,
    So that no one knows.
    Counter and jab,
    At least try to fight.
    Block and deflect,
    To ward away pain.
    Circle once more,
    Just to get hit again.
    Sweat dripping,
    Heart poured in.
    The hardest fight I've ever seen,
    Fight for my life, and my sanity.
    I did everything I possibly could,
    But in the end I'm K.O.ed again.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: K.O.ed

    WOW Bratling, hum when I first read it I thought of Jousting or Fencing but in the end it seems your fighting with your self somewhat. good job though keep up the good work! I hope to see more from you!
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    Re: K.O.ed

    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    WOW Bratling, hum when I first read it I thought of Jousting or Fencing but in the end it seems your fighting with your self somewhat. good job though keep up the good work! I hope to see more from you!
    Thanks. I'm glad you think so highly about it. I was thinking about boxing or grappling strangly enough. Though jousting and fencing work too I suppose. It was about fighting with myself. Thanks again for the comments.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: K.O.ed

    You're gonna give yourself a black eye at this rate, LOL. No, seriously though. I like your poem, it's just sucky that you're so down lately.


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    Re: K.O.ed

    Lately? Where have you been the last six months? THanks for the comment though. I am rather pleased with this one cus I think it's really different then most of the things I write even if it is on the same subject.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: K.O.ed

    "The hardest fight I've ever seen,
    Fight for my life, and my sanity.
    I did everything I possibly could,
    But in the end I'm K.O.ed again."

    sounds like you did everything you could... ^^ at least you did your best... dont worry and try again next time with better preparation

    Nicely done.. love it ^^ a very interesting and creative poem.. ^^

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