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Keep reaching
I wanna keep reaching
Holding up my hands high
Only when I feel it
Like touching the sky
I wanna keep reaching
For something I wanna do
I have to keep going
But not without you
I wanna keep reaching
For all of my dreams
And if I make it
I know what life brings
*laughs*:laugh:
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Re: Keep reaching
cute poem I liked where you said "I have to reaching,but not without you". That was sweet.
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Re: Keep reaching
I like your poem... it's short there's no need for it to be longer, You've said everything in these tree stanzas. I too like the line:
"I have to keep going
But not without you". It changes the meaning momentaly and makes the poem... sweeter... :) Veru nice! :)
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Re: Keep reaching
Thanks Cherry and Lasura, I like that part too, I came up with it out of my head lol.