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    Keep reaching

    I wanna keep reaching
    Holding up my hands high
    Only when I feel it
    Like touching the sky

    I wanna keep reaching
    For something I wanna do
    I have to keep going
    But not without you

    I wanna keep reaching
    For all of my dreams
    And if I make it
    I know what life brings
    *laughs*

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    Re: Keep reaching

    cute poem I liked where you said "I have to reaching,but not without you". That was sweet.
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    Re: Keep reaching

    I like your poem... it's short there's no need for it to be longer, You've said everything in these tree stanzas. I too like the line:
    "I have to keep going
    But not without you". It changes the meaning momentaly and makes the poem... sweeter... Veru nice!

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    Re: Keep reaching

    Thanks Cherry and Lasura, I like that part too, I came up with it out of my head lol.

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