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Sep 09, 2007, 01:51 PM
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 Femmebot's feel nothing.  Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley
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 Credits: 2,204 | Keep it Real (Truth) When I think of love... I think of sin. How will I ever love again? If only to fall out of "love" with him. All new love falls to the wind Worried of my actions if I sight them. Pushed into a corner, I will fight them. I dont want all I do, to be something done to spite them. Feels so good to be aknowleged. To find I still have pride to polish. But needing to be told, means my own spirit will abolish. I feel so safe, like in a dream. To be held in high esteem. Still I await the time I find, that goodness is not what it seemed. Never wanted things to end up quite like this. I could not stop these circumstances. Choose protecting friend over fleash, there will be no second chances. And now I'm wrapped in truth's warm blanket. Don't dish it out if you can't take it. I still have all I need. The love. The offspring. The means of which to make it. |
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Sep 09, 2007, 02:14 PM
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  Chtonian Slayer  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know
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Credits: 31,396 | Re: Keep it Real (Truth) Awesome!!!! Loved the words and how they rhymed!!!! Great job!!!!!
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Sep 09, 2007, 02:29 PM
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Credits: 290 | Re: Keep it Real (Truth) wow i loved it b/c i Loved the words and how you made then rhymed so well !!!!!!!!!!!!!
__________________ There is never happiness in a place of paon thats why i picked pain |
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Sep 10, 2007, 03:10 AM
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| Femmebot's feel nothing. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley
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Credits: 2,204 | Re: Keep it Real (Truth) Thank you both. I think if I had it to do over, I would use a more descriptive title. |
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Sep 10, 2007, 04:45 AM
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| 1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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Credits: 59,118 | Re: Keep it Real (Truth) Hmm... this is nicely done... nice theme too... hmm... it is the truth abt truth...  good job... i like it ^^ keep up the good work  |
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Sep 10, 2007, 10:38 AM
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| Femmebot's feel nothing. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley
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Credits: 2,204 | Re: Keep it Real (Truth) Yeah... I just wish I could've written something that would go better with the title...Or given it a title that fit the poem like "my thruths" or something. |
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