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    Keeping it to your self

    It starts off feeling great as the
    months go by the feeling change
    and you get closer with every moment,
    the love is there the feelings are true.

    The moments start to fade as words
    cherished are forgotten ,you don't
    realise the pain i go through when you
    take for granted all that i try to say and do,
    you just accept that I'm OK and go on with what you do.

    The time we spend together seems less and less,
    why you don't see something wrong with that is
    something i will never understand, the moment comes
    and then we smile again ,like nothing is really wrong.

    Why cant you just come out and say what you mean?
    because i feel like everything we have is falling apart,
    and my world is collapsing.

    this poem is all about how people first fall in love and it
    is the strongest feeling in the world ,then over time
    something is said or done that makes one feel awkward
    or weird and they keep silent about it letting the other
    person think something is wrong ,being open is what the poem
    is about . and this is just a poem it has nothing to do with
    anything in my life but i thought since there are so many people
    having problems with this a poem about it would be a good
    idea, any comments or suggestions are welcomed
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Keeping it to your self

    Very true. I liked it. I guess I can kinda relate to your poem. Your words were true though with how people feel sometimes.
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