Very true. I liked it. I guess I can kinda relate to your poem. Your words were true though with how people feel sometimes.
It starts off feeling great as the
months go by the feeling change
and you get closer with every moment,
the love is there the feelings are true.
The moments start to fade as words
cherished are forgotten ,you don't
realise the pain i go through when you
take for granted all that i try to say and do,
you just accept that I'm OK and go on with what you do.
The time we spend together seems less and less,
why you don't see something wrong with that is
something i will never understand, the moment comes
and then we smile again ,like nothing is really wrong.
Why cant you just come out and say what you mean?
because i feel like everything we have is falling apart,
and my world is collapsing.
this poem is all about how people first fall in love and it
is the strongest feeling in the world ,then over time
something is said or done that makes one feel awkward
or weird and they keep silent about it letting the other
person think something is wrong ,being open is what the poem
is about . and this is just a poem it has nothing to do with
anything in my life but i thought since there are so many people
having problems with this a poem about it would be a good
idea, any comments or suggestions are welcomed
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Very true. I liked it. I guess I can kinda relate to your poem. Your words were true though with how people feel sometimes.
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
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