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    Re: Kelly's Song

    nice poem it shows a lot of innocents
    while showing something romantic very cool
    job i like this poem a lot , love should be so
    simple but it isnt for most but putting it like
    this shows it can be
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Kelly's Song

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    nice poem it shows a lot of innocents
    while showing something romantic very cool
    job i like this poem a lot , love should be so
    simple but it isnt for most but putting it like
    this shows it can be
    Well, I don't believe that you have to talk about someone in a sexual way to tell the world you love him/her. Love should transcend what the body feels . . . I sound so lame . . .

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    Re: Kelly's Song

    Sweet!!!!! ^^ i wish someone would write such a love song to me!!!!! So nice and sweet and lovely and a bit of sad too... nice work ^^ I'd really wish to hear how it's played too ^^ It's probably even better...

    I hope u posted more while I was gone, this is really good ^^

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    Re: Kelly's Song

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Sweet!!!!! ^^ i wish someone would write such a love song to me!!!!! So nice and sweet and lovely and a bit of sad too... nice work ^^ I'd really wish to hear how it's played too ^^ It's probably even better...

    I hope u posted more while I was gone, this is really good ^^
    Thanks. I've also posted Trying to Write a Poem, inspired by e.e. cummings (under Poem of the Month) and Bethany's Song for Kelly's roommate.

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