Thread: Kelly's Song

Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice

nice poem it shows a lot of innocents
while showing something romantic very cool
job i like this poem a lot , love should be so
simple but it isnt for most but putting it like
this shows it can be

Well, I don't believe that you have to talk about someone in a sexual way to tell the world you love him/her. Love should transcend what the body feels . . . I sound so lame . . .

Sweet!!!!! ^^ i wish someone would write such a love song to me!!!!! So nice and sweet and lovely and a bit of sad too... nice work ^^ I'd really wish to hear how it's played too ^^ It's probably even better...

I hope u posted more while I was gone, this is really good ^^

Originally Posted by Lasura

Sweet!!!!! ^^ i wish someone would write such a love song to me!!!!! So nice and sweet and lovely and a bit of sad too... nice work ^^ I'd really wish to hear how it's played too ^^ It's probably even better...

I hope u posted more while I was gone, this is really good ^^

Thanks. I've also posted Trying to Write a Poem, inspired by e.e. cummings (under Poem of the Month) and Bethany's Song for Kelly's roommate.