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    Kill Me, Break Me

    A song. Don't worry I'm not like this. Just something that came to my head listening to a dark song


    Break me
    Throw me up
    Against the walls
    Destroy me
    Rip me apart
    Curse me
    Its what you want!

    Verse 1:
    You always wanted me
    Pain you wanted to cause me
    Drive me crazy
    Make me cry in pain
    Pour destruction over me!

    Chorus:
    All to your enjoyment
    From the softness of my skin
    To the drops of my blood
    As you taste me

    Because I don't belong to you
    You be sure no one has me
    Destroy me like you want

    (Burn me, break me, kill me)

    Verse 2:
    My body chained
    Stripped down to nothing
    A knife cuts along my skin
    I cry out in pain
    Music to you ears
    More you want to hear

    Chorus:
    All to your enjoyment
    From the softness of my skin
    To the drops of my blood
    As you taste me

    (Break me)

    Because I don't belong to you
    You be sure no one has me
    Destroy me like you want

    (Destroy me)

    All to your enjoyment
    From the softness of my skin
    To the drops of my blood
    As you taste me

    (Curse me)

    Because I don't belong to you
    You be sure no one has me
    Destroy me like you want

    (Kill me!!)
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    Re: Kill Me

    Wow Cierra. That's painfully emotional. Its good. Keep it up

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    Re: Kill Me

    wow very daek poem ,very discriptive as well i loved it, you
    discribe totture pretty good here trying to show you pain when
    all you wand it to be left alone. my favorite part was this

    Because I don't belong to you
    You be sure no one has me
    Destroy me like you want

    (Kill me!!)

    very cool way to end a poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Kill Me

    Thank you. I'm glad ya'll like it
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    Re: Kill Me

    Wow!!! Now this was Awesome,Amamzing,Wonderful!! Cierra,this song was soooo good.I truly enjoyed reading it.It had passion,it was dark and sad.This was sooo amamzing!! Awesome job!!!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Kill Me

    I think you did an awesome job on this song, and I have to agree with Shini on this one! Keep up the awesome work!

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    Awsome girl you really brought that out you really captured it.
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    Re: Kill Me

    its like pain unleashing on the hate of the one who never cares for you, its really awsome though, keep it up

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