Hmm. A little bit of grammar and lots of capitalization is needed. ^^
i once loved and now i may be a heatless
witch
but i have my resons
cos when you love someone like no other
and u fall apart and thers no fixing it
so now im the heartless witch u know today
i hate seeing people happy togeter
i wish
i wish
i never met the men i most loved in my life
now cos of him i cant even live a good life
after all hes put me tho i still loved him
now i cant find it in my heart to love again
so thats why im so cold hearted and alone today .
Hmm. A little bit of grammar and lots of capitalization is needed. ^^
Seduced by Flesh
WAH~!!!
*a moment*
>.< Its sad Lizzy.
Why have you turn cold! I will not call you on the other thing ^_~ its ok~ XD
nice poem~
thank you both for the commets ^_^
very awesome poem and i liked the topic as well
since everyone feels this way till the next person
come alone, that get so cold they act liked this and
die alone in the world with no freidns or famly, and your
poem points this out sort of , and that what i get from it
anyway, very awesome poem
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
I really liked the poem it was sad but nice.
HELLDEATHSKATER
get strong equinn!!
do not be too sad because your heart is breaking now
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get some fun then... play xbox/ps2/or whatever...
or just make new sig or wallpaper...
do not be too sad. hehe.....
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I agree with Kasai. It was a kool peom by the way.
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