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    Nice work, shinigami! You are very talented in writing these songs/poems. It was very touching. I felt the emotion. Great job, SA. Keep it up!

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    Great job once again sis. It was so dark and mysterious and it told an awesome story. I don't think you could ever write a bad song.
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    "Waiting for the end"

    I'm all alone, Watching everything from afar
    This is how I am, But noone will ever understand
    How could they ever think that they could understand me, There's something wrong with me
    I'm so sick of them all, I just wanna be alone so that I can finally cry!...
    I love this part Angel I can relate to it so easily and yet you put it into words. I think that the repeating of words could have been narrowed down but it's fine. I also love this part.

    "I just wish to fade away.
    So that I may finally be able to rest in peace.
    For I should have never lived this life.
    This life that I once wished for.
    Because now all I wish for, is for everything to disappear along with me.
    Kill me so that I may finally disappear!"....
    Where you get your inspiration I will never know but I love it. Keep up the great work. Didn't I tell you you had talent and to take it to the extreme. Well girl your doing it.
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    @ RayMe-Thank you. And yes I know that it's a bit long but that is because it's a song.

    @ HolderOfTheDarkChalice-Thank you sooooo very much big bro!! *hugs* I'm so glad that you like it!! Since I haven't wrote anything dark in awhile I thought that this would make you happy lol.Thanks again big bro!! *hugs*

    @ fredsboo-Thanks Kira! *hugs* Ha ha very funny lol.

    @ LostbutFound-Thank you sooo very much!! *hugs*

    @ koga23-Thank you so very much Koga!! *hugs* I'm glad that you like it so much.

    @ The White Wolf-Thank you sooooo very much!! *hugs* I'm so glad that you like it and that you think that i'm talented.Thanks again so much.

    @ CherryBlossom18-Thank you sooooo very much Sis!! *hugs* I'm so happy that you like it.Yeah it did huh lol.I was a bit depressed that day so I wrote this 2 make me feel better.Thanks again sis! *hugs*

    @ Ky-lyrra-Thank you soooooooooooooo much Ky-lyrra!!! *hugs* I'm so glad that you like it so much.Yeah I know lol but it just kinda felt right ya know lol.Yeah i'm trying 2 do my best so that I can keep all my friends and fans happy here lol. Thanks again sooo much!! *hugs*
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    Re: Kill Me So That I May Disappear...

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    @ RayMe-Thank you. And yes I know that it's a bit long but that is because it's a song.

    @ HolderOfTheDarkChalice-Thank you sooooo very much big bro!! *hugs* I'm so glad that you like it!! Since I haven't wrote anything dark in awhile I thought that this would make you happy lol.Thanks again big bro!! *hugs*

    @ fredsboo-Thanks Kira! *hugs* Ha ha very funny lol.

    @ LostbutFound-Thank you sooo very much!! *hugs*

    @ koga23-Thank you so very much Koga!! *hugs* I'm glad that you like it so much.

    @ The White Wolf-Thank you sooooo very much!! *hugs* I'm so glad that you like it and that you think that i'm talented.Thanks again so much.

    @ CherryBlossom18-Thank you sooooo very much Sis!! *hugs* I'm so happy that you like it.Yeah it did huh lol.I was a bit depressed that day so I wrote this 2 make me feel better.Thanks again sis! *hugs*

    @ Ky-lyrra-Thank you soooooooooooooo much Ky-lyrra!!! *hugs* I'm so glad that you like it so much.Yeah I know lol but it just kinda felt right ya know lol.Yeah i'm trying 2 do my best so that I can keep all my friends and fans happy here lol. Thanks again sooo much!! *hugs*
    Your very welcome sweetie *hugs back* it's the least I could do. I mean when I see talent I tell it to read head on and reach the goal.
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    Your very welcome Angel its the lest i could do for ur hard work .
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    Ky-lyrra and Koga thank you guys again so much!! It means so much mean 2 me. *hugs Ky-lyrra and Koga*
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Kill Me So That I May Disappear...

    It is good to read another of your songs.The repetitions grabs my attention quite quickly and it is easy to feel those words as a result.I guess inspiration comes from events in your life or your feelings.That I am not certain.But that song's supurb.Clap!Whistle!

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