Most of us are sad
No one lets it show
I’ve been shadows of myself
How was I to know?
Tell me scarlet sun
What will time allow?
We have brought our children
Here who can save them now?
Oh, weeping woman try to smile
Like the coming dawn
Most of us are sad it’s true
Still we must go on
Love was here today
Oh the sun was bright
I will sing you faraway
Love is here tonight
Most of us are sad
No one lets it show
I’ve been shadows of myself
How was I to know? for you ...how do you think to finish you song
Foolish beating
Shini, this wonderful poem that you made moved me into sadness. You used a variety of words, that will the reader see himself/herself in the poem. By reading your poem, the pain and suffering that you presnted made me felt that it was so real. Many of the readers, like me, relates to this poem.
Keep up the Superb job!
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
Thank you sooooooooooooooo very much for the awesome and wonderful comment Raja!!!! *hugs*I'm so happy that you enjoyed it!!
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
^^ Shini, you are a really talented person. The poems, like this one, makes the reader connected into reality. You have this heart as you write your poems. We, are all looking forward to read your poems. ^^
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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