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Old Apr 03, 2006, 10:28 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I'm working on a book of my poetry. Here is one of my recent ones. Not the best. But a taste i guess. Hope you likey!

The air is cold with winter’s bite
My lips roll back
Cringing from the taste
The air blows echo’s
Guilty and pleading nothing against it
Take a picture
And I can fake extraordinary
Make believe ghosts
Are actually you taking my breath
Amplifying it
You amaze me
Freezing time
Conjure up fire
To melt my heart away
Each step in the snow
Remembering your footprints
Shiver up my spine
Your everywhere
While you live in my numbing affection
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Old Apr 03, 2006, 10:47 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Killing December

Like it. I really like this, but it seens like the past may come up to hunt you.
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Old Apr 03, 2006, 10:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Killing December

Thanx...but what? Past is going to haunt me? What do you mean?
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Old Apr 03, 2006, 11:12 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I like it good job I hate winter cause of evry thing u just posted in your poem
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Old Apr 03, 2006, 11:51 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanx...but what? Past is going to haunt me? What do you mean?
Sorry I said that wrong, but, The Poem seem like the past is in it. Just what I think. Sorry for the confusion.
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ya, it good. keep it up!
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This is a good poem! keep up the good work!
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Old Apr 04, 2006, 04:03 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Thanx guys. I really appreciate it.
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Once agian good work.
Keep it up please.
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Re: Killing December

GRRREAT poem i loves it. Vivid imagery useage ^_^
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very nice...looking forward reading more..
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