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Reply With QuoteLike it. I really like this, but it seens like the past may come up to hunt you.
Killing December I'm working on a book of my poetry. Here is one of my recent ones. Not the best. But a taste i guess. Hope you likey!
The air is cold with winter’s bite
My lips roll back
Cringing from the taste
The air blows echo’s
Guilty and pleading nothing against it
Take a picture
And I can fake extraordinary
Make believe ghosts
Are actually you taking my breath
Amplifying it
You amaze me
Freezing time
Conjure up fire
To melt my heart away
Each step in the snow
Remembering your footprints
Shiver up my spine
Your everywhere
While you live in my numbing affection
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
Like it. I really like this, but it seens like the past may come up to hunt you.
Thanx...but what? Past is going to haunt me? What do you mean?
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
I like it good job I hate winter cause of evry thing u just posted in your poem
Sorry I said that wrong, but, The Poem seem like the past is in it. Just what I think.Originally Posted by Nympho
ya, it good. keep it up!
This is a good poem! keep up the good work!
Thanx guys. I really appreciate it.
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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