Killing December

Nympho · Apr 03, 2006, 10:28 PM

I'm working on a book of my poetry. Here is one of my recent ones. Not the best. But a taste i guess. Hope you likey!

The air is cold with winter’s bite
My lips roll back
Cringing from the taste
The air blows echo’s
Guilty and pleading nothing against it
Take a picture
And I can fake extraordinary
Make believe ghosts
Are actually you taking my breath
Amplifying it
You amaze me
Freezing time
Conjure up fire
To melt my heart away
Each step in the snow
Remembering your footprints
Shiver up my spine
Your everywhere
While you live in my numbing affection

*Mr. K* · Apr 03, 2006, 10:47 PM

Like it. I really like this, but it seens like the past may come up to hunt you.

Nympho · Apr 03, 2006, 10:50 PM

Thanx...but what? Past is going to haunt me? What do you mean?

Lazy Man · Apr 03, 2006, 11:12 PM

I like it good job I hate winter cause of evry thing u just posted in your poem

*Mr. K* · Apr 03, 2006, 11:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nympho

Thanx...but what? Past is going to haunt me? What do you mean?

Sorry I said that wrong, but, The Poem seem like the past is in it. Just what I think.

Sorry for the confusion.

BrightShadow_96 · Apr 04, 2006, 06:15 AM

ya, it good. keep it up!

Alucard_Spriggan · Apr 04, 2006, 06:25 AM

This is a good poem! keep up the good work!

Nympho · Apr 04, 2006, 04:03 PM

Thanx guys. I really appreciate it.

viper11025 · Apr 05, 2006, 07:54 PM

Once agian good work.
Keep it up please.

*jaderabbit* · Apr 05, 2006, 09:56 PM

GRRREAT poem i loves it. Vivid imagery useage ^_^

elie26 · Apr 06, 2006, 12:11 AM

very nice...looking forward reading more..

Apr 03, 2006, 10:28 PM	#1 (permalink)
Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 601	Killing December I'm working on a book of my poetry. Here is one of my recent ones. Not the best. But a taste i guess. Hope you likey! The air is cold with winter’s bite My lips roll back Cringing from the taste The air blows echo’s Guilty and pleading nothing against it Take a picture And I can fake extraordinary Make believe ghosts Are actually you taking my breath Amplifying it You amaze me Freezing time Conjure up fire To melt my heart away Each step in the snow Remembering your footprints Shiver up my spine Your everywhere While you live in my numbing affection __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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Mr. K THUMBSUCKING ADDICTION Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Alaska Posts: 1,257 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,682	Re: Killing December Like it. I really like this, but it seens like the past may come up to hunt you. __________________ ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤ ◕ ◡ ◕;;;;[?]
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Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 601	Re: Killing December Thanx...but what? Past is going to haunt me? What do you mean? __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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Lazy Man Newbie Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: some where Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 10	Re: Killing December I like it good job I hate winter cause of evry thing u just posted in your poem
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BrightShadow_96 遁走より本当 Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Inside Reality & Serenity Posts: 571 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,355	Re: Killing December ya, it good. keep it up! __________________
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Apr 04, 2006, 06:25 AM	#7 (permalink)
Alucard_Spriggan Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Florida Posts: 257 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 840	Re: Killing December This is a good poem! keep up the good work! __________________ Hey if u have xbox live add me or msg me on my Xbox 360 tag Sin Spriggan. *Thank you Ryomakurosaki for the wicked sig!!*
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Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 601	Re: Killing December Thanx guys. I really appreciate it. __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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viper11025 Under Surveilance Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: " Unknown & Unseen" Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 359	Re: Killing December Once agian good work. Keep it up please.
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jaderabbit Cheetos Overlord Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: The World Posts: 3,647 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 6,714	Re: Killing December GRRREAT poem i loves it. Vivid imagery useage ^_^ __________________ -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate- \|THE INFAMOUS\|The Host\|Twilight Series\|Twilight Movie\|
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elie26 Elie Jelly Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement Posts: 608 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,051	Re: Killing December very nice...looking forward reading more.. __________________
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