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    Red face Killing December

    I'm working on a book of my poetry. Here is one of my recent ones. Not the best. But a taste i guess. Hope you likey!

    The air is cold with winter’s bite
    My lips roll back
    Cringing from the taste
    The air blows echo’s
    Guilty and pleading nothing against it
    Take a picture
    And I can fake extraordinary
    Make believe ghosts
    Are actually you taking my breath
    Amplifying it
    You amaze me
    Freezing time
    Conjure up fire
    To melt my heart away
    Each step in the snow
    Remembering your footprints
    Shiver up my spine
    Your everywhere
    While you live in my numbing affection

    I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.

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    Re: Killing December

    Like it. I really like this, but it seens like the past may come up to hunt you.
    ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤
    You know how you drown a blonde, Rosalie? Glue a mirror to the bottom of a pool.
    Jacob Black, Breaking Dawn, Chapter 14, p.271
    Lamie Hynamen "I reject your reality and substitute my own."

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    Re: Killing December

    Thanx...but what? Past is going to haunt me? What do you mean?

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    Re: Killing December

    I like it good job I hate winter cause of evry thing u just posted in your poem

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    Re: Killing December

    Quote Originally Posted by Nympho
    Thanx...but what? Past is going to haunt me? What do you mean?
    Sorry I said that wrong, but, The Poem seem like the past is in it. Just what I think. Sorry for the confusion.
    ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤
    You know how you drown a blonde, Rosalie? Glue a mirror to the bottom of a pool.
    Jacob Black, Breaking Dawn, Chapter 14, p.271
    Lamie Hynamen "I reject your reality and substitute my own."

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    Re: Killing December

    ya, it good. keep it up!

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    Re: Killing December

    This is a good poem! keep up the good work!

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    Re: Killing December

    Thanx guys. I really appreciate it.

    I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.

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