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    Killing Dusk

    This is sort of an old poem...thats proably why it sucks so bad


    Glitter spilled from the sky
    and landed upon my eyes.

    Violins sounded in the night air
    making angels bow their heads in despair.

    Stars poured from my eyes
    creating a sillohouette in the empty sky.

    Should the earth weather away
    into the depths of the cosmos today,
    I'll be here waiting for your
    voice, for your face, for any trace
    of you in that shattered place.

    The veins of this world are running thin
    and dry, the dusk begins to weep and die.

    Leaves cover the ground,
    hiding the truth in our lives.

    Can't you hear the birds telling lies.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Killing Dusk

    Well i like the poem.i think that it was written gacefully and beatufily.its wonderful

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    Re: Killing Dusk

    it seems to deep for me to understand then again that was my first glance great poem though

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    Re: Killing Dusk

    Thankies...no worries I take that as a compliment. Sometimes it's good not to understand things...it makes it more fun when you find out later ^-^
    Dear Dinah...

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