WOW This is a really good poem. Your poems are awsome. I really like your style. Your poem was soo deep and sincier. I really hope to see more of your work. I have to say I'm a fan of yuor work.(^.^)
killing me softly
here i sit next to you, so near yet so far away.
my heart races every time your near.
yet your killing me softly with your smile, with your looks with your heart.
your killing me because i love you so much, yet you dont share the same thoughts.
im lieing here now in this place so near but so full of fear.
i wish to tell you my dear how i feel about you, but the thought of the answer just sends chills down my spine.
im not ment to dine in such a place, im not that kind.
your my freind, one of the best a guy could ask for, but i want so much more.
your killing me because you dont want to take a risk, though it might be my own fault for not stepping up and taking a swing.
your killing me while im killing myself, i cant keep the pace with this race.
in due time im going to fail, but will you be there to pick up the pieces?
im so close yet so far away, i can feel you but i dont know if you can feel me.
im here crying now torn between freindship and love.
your killing me by being so nice, your just killing me o'so softly.
im lost in this place not knowing wheither i should take that leap of faith.
im killing myself with all the weight, the weight on never knowing.
im such a coward when it comes to asking, your killing me softly by just glancing.
yeah! thats cool and thanks for the comment i really do appricate it, you wanted to see another one so i made another one! ill see about making another one shortly
I really like this poem
everyone can relate to this topic at one point in time
your inner fight
trying to decide between staying friends or attepmting a relationship
its a touchy situation
and takes a lot of guts to step up ans face rejection
but you'll never know if you dont try
and can you live with that?
this was a really good job and you could probably turn it into a thread in the debating/discusions forum
awww thanks! to face it is to face ones fear...... and ill stare down the fear to get what i want...
yeah will to live is to take risks.. im not going out with out a few!
i took the challenge and im happy with the out come
lol I need to be a lil more like you in that department lol