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    Killing time...

    Killing time...

    I'm killing time!
    Or is time killing me?
    Kill the clock keeping time...
    Kill the man holding the clock...
    Will the clock kill the man holding time?
    Or will time kill the clock holding the man?
    Maybe the clock will kill time and man...

    It's killing time!


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    Re: Killing time...

    Nice........for some reason...I can see these words being lyrics for an awesome rock song....maybe it is just me......but it is still very nice!!!!!!!!
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    Wow... O.O some confusion there O.o

    I've read this again and again just to get it -.-

    Anyway, lovely and short and confusing....with the questioning.

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    Re: Killing time...

    Thanks! Both of you. ^_^ This poem wasn't supposed to really mean anything, per se. I intended to spark thoughtful questions with this one. Like, "what is time anyway?"


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    Re: Killing time...

    ... i imagined myself in that situation and i saw myself bumping my head continuesly to the wall... xD

    Nice... xD a bit funny... but the issue in it... is time.. a very important thing..

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    Re: Killing time...

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    ... i imagined myself in that situation and i saw myself bumping my head continuesly to the wall... xD

    Nice... xD a bit funny... but the issue in it... is time.. a very important thing..
    *pokes* bad Ray!!! No thinking bad things like smashing against walls, k?

    A very interesting poem... quite confusing But interesting... I enjoyed reading this. And it made me think... and the confusion agian is not a bad thing because it shows how confused the lyrical "me" is ^^

    Anyways... nice work!!!! ^^

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    Re: Killing time...

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    ... i imagined myself in that situation and i saw myself bumping my head continuesly to the wall... xD

    Nice... xD a bit funny... but the issue in it... is time.. a very important thing..
    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    *pokes* bad Ray!!! No thinking bad things like smashing against walls, k?

    A very interesting poem... quite confusing But interesting... I enjoyed reading this. And it made me think... and the confusion agian is not a bad thing because it shows how confused the lyrical "me" is ^^

    Anyways... nice work!!!! ^^
    Thanks you guys! I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, I kinda purposely made this one to confuse people and get them to ask questions about the poem and the concept of time itself.

    Ray, listen to Laura! Keep bashing your head against the wall and you'll get a brain injury, LOL! Thanks again you two! ^_^


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    Re: Killing time...

    That was a tad bit confusing... But I liked it. It really makes you think! Even if it might take a while to understand, it's a pretty deep thought.

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