the king

some call me
the king
infamous for the
terror i bring

some call me
the king
cuz of the wicked chants
that i sing

others call me
the best
better than all
the rest

others call me
the best
dont dare ask me the parts
of which i manifest

Hmm... the other one you posted here is better I think ^^ This one is a lill bit weird... But still I like it and enjoyed reading it. Nice and short as always and rythming.... I definetely couldn't write better...

Nice work, I'll be waiting forward for the next one! ^^

you can write that good lasura and these are ones im making up in two minutes and im about to make another

It was good but a bit... I dont know really it had this thing which made me dislike it yet it's well written, i'm not sure i'm half 'n half