Thread: the king

Hmm... the other one you posted here is better I think ^^ This one is a lill bit weird... But still I like it and enjoyed reading it. Nice and short as always and rythming.... I definetely couldn't write better...

Nice work, I'll be waiting forward for the next one! ^^

you can write that good lasura and these are ones im making up in two minutes and im about to make another

It was good but a bit... I dont know really it had this thing which made me dislike it yet it's well written, i'm not sure i'm half 'n half