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    the king

    some call me
    the king
    infamous for the
    terror i bring

    some call me
    the king
    cuz of the wicked chants
    that i sing

    others call me
    the best
    better than all
    the rest

    others call me
    the best
    dont dare ask me the parts
    of which i manifest

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    Re: the king

    Hmm... the other one you posted here is better I think ^^ This one is a lill bit weird... But still I like it and enjoyed reading it. Nice and short as always and rythming.... I definetely couldn't write better...

    Nice work, I'll be waiting forward for the next one! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: the king

    you can write that good lasura and these are ones im making up in two minutes and im about to make another

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    Re: the king

    It was good but a bit... I dont know really it had this thing which made me dislike it yet it's well written, i'm not sure i'm half 'n half

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