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Reply With QuoteI like the flow of the poem...but The first and second line really don't flow well...it's weird,, but otherwise...Good Idea...keep it up.
Do you Know a kiss is...
After you kiss someone what do you feel...
A kiss is nothing special...
A kiss is very special...
A kiss can tell...
Tell how they feel tward you...
Tell what you feel tward them...
What do you feel...
A kiss can tell if you like them,
Tell if they want you...
If you listen It may tell you,
Kisses have always tryed to tell us...
they scream it but we don't listen.
That is how we get hurt...
the kiss told us but we didn't listen...
you are mad and so many other feelings...
A kiss is nothing
A kiss is everything
A kiss is bittersweet...
Because it tells the truth...
I like the flow of the poem...but The first and second line really don't flow well...it's weird,, but otherwise...Good Idea...keep it up.
o~Piggy-san~o
hmm it's very good in my oppinion and i like it...ur very good and keep up the good work...but it's makes me a lil sad at times through.
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I will fight until i find what i'm looking for...you can not judge me on my apperence I am a Warrior. If you have a problem with me..... then my blades will meet your neck.
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