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    Kiss of death

    When I see you I start to cry the tears on
    My eyes just tell you what's on my mind
    Thinking of love just makes me sick
    It makes me want to throw you a kiss
    but just not any kiss the kiss of death
    so not only do you die
    my tears my memories, and my broken heart
    die as well as you do so once again
    so you get it right
    I'm sick of being loved
    sick of being betrayed
    I'm sick of loving you
    I wonder if you are too?

    Note: Well I make this one but not for my friends or anyone here...

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Kiss of death

    Quote Originally Posted by xxoxx View Post
    When I see you I start to cry the tears on
    My eyes just tell you what's on my mind
    Thinking of love just makes me sick
    It makes me want to throw you a kiss
    but just not any kiss the kiss of death
    so not only do you die
    my tears my memories, and my broken heart
    die as well as you do so once again
    so you get it right
    I'm sick of being loved
    sick of being betrayed
    I'm sick of loving you
    I wonder if you are too?

    Note: Well I make this one but not for my friends or anyone here...
    Another dark poem from xxoxx!!!! Another BEAUTIFUL poem from xxoxx!!! Keep up the amazing work.

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    Re: Kiss of death

    I love it... A broken heart will do that to you... They say there is nothing like a woman's scorn I say there is nothing like a hurt loved... Both of them are deadly at times & it seems you have both qualities...

    I love it I hope to see some more of your work... Pieces of a broken heart or one that is put back together... Either one would be fine with me since you seem to have the talent to write... ^_^

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    Re: Kiss of death

    ouch...some anger there...*gulps* nicely done... keep up the good work

    *girls are not to be messed with...*

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    Re: Kiss of death

    Whoa.......blew my mind straight off!!!!!!!
    Beautiful and stunning!!!!!!
    Great job!!!!!
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

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