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    Kiss

    I take the knife,
    and place it to my lips.
    I kiss it gently,
    then test with figures tips.

    My finger opens,
    the time is right.
    You are the last
    I shall see tonight.

    With my kiss,
    I touch my skin.
    Ignoring the fact
    this is a sin.

    I grace my flesh,
    wishing it was you.
    And in this instant,
    my life is through.
    Last edited by Darkened_Star; Apr 10, 2007 at 05:43 AM.

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    Re: Kiss(it's not what you think)

    it is what i think it is.. is it?

    well u are not cutting ur self again did u?
    this sounds like a suicide @.@ my my....

    good poem btw... :/

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    Re: Kiss(it's not what you think)

    that is a good poem.
    That express what u thing.
    so, keep going u'r good.
    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

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    Re: Kiss(it's not what you think)

    very expressive........................................ ..but i hope your not gonna hurt yourself

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    Re: Kiss(it's not what you think)

    is this suicide..or an actual kiss..or a combination of both?

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    Re: Kiss(it's not what you think)

    It's sort of both... I guess, but it's mostly about suicide. I'm not going to kill myself though. I'm not that weak.

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