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Old Jul 09, 2007, 08:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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kiss me

kiss me

kiss me but
don't forget me
hold me but
don't let me go

need me but
don't say goodbye
love me but
don't love another

kiss me until tomorrow
hold me forever
need me for the rest of ur life
love me and kiss me and hope u know i wish this would never end

well i hope u all like it!!!
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Old Jul 09, 2007, 09:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
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oooOOOOooo very nice poem! So romantic! Good job hope to see more!!!!
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Old Jul 09, 2007, 09:55 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: kiss me

Good job! I love the poem. Very romantic. ^_^ Hope to see more!
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Old Jul 09, 2007, 10:57 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Very cute and romantic, this poem nicely speaks of true love. Good work and hope to see more.^^
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Old Jul 09, 2007, 10:58 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: kiss me

Very awesome play on words. I like it!
Simply sweet.
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Old Jul 10, 2007, 06:47 AM   #6 (permalink)
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thanks i wrote it for my friend and her bf. she wanted a way to tell him she loved but with no physical contact. so she asked to write a peom about them. soo yea.. thanks again for the replies and yes i will be writing more!
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Old Jul 10, 2007, 06:59 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Keep up the writing. While unpolished the sentiment and feeling in this poem is absolutely adorible. I like it a lot. It made me smile and I'm a cynic.
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Old Jul 10, 2007, 07:43 AM   #8 (permalink)
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I think it is a really nice poem i thouhg tit really sounded really nice and meant something
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Old Jul 10, 2007, 08:50 AM   #9 (permalink)
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I love this poem so much!!!!!!! It's just so romantic and sweet really so I hope to see more really!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old Jul 10, 2007, 08:56 AM   #10 (permalink)
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arr...it be pretty good. but i am not a pirate. but good all the same!
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Old Jul 10, 2007, 09:11 AM   #11 (permalink)
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lol another great poem, i hope u love poetry and not posting them for fun, lol w/e doesnt matter keep up the good work
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