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    kiss me

    kiss me

    kiss me but
    don't forget me
    hold me but
    don't let me go

    need me but
    don't say goodbye
    love me but
    don't love another

    kiss me until tomorrow
    hold me forever
    need me for the rest of ur life
    love me and kiss me and hope u know i wish this would never end

    well i hope u all like it!!!
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    Re: kiss me

    oooOOOOooo very nice poem! So romantic! Good job hope to see more!!!!



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    Good job! I love the poem. Very romantic. ^_^ Hope to see more!

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    Re: kiss me

    Very cute and romantic, this poem nicely speaks of true love. Good work and hope to see more.^^

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    Re: kiss me

    Very awesome play on words. I like it!
    Simply sweet.

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    thanks i wrote it for my friend and her bf. she wanted a way to tell him she loved but with no physical contact. so she asked to write a peom about them. soo yea.. thanks again for the replies and yes i will be writing more!
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    Keep up the writing. While unpolished the sentiment and feeling in this poem is absolutely adorible. I like it a lot. It made me smile and I'm a cynic.

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    I think it is a really nice poem i thouhg tit really sounded really nice and meant something

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