oooOOOOooo very nice poem! So romantic! Good job hope to see more!!!!
kiss me but
don't forget me
hold me but
don't let me go
need me but
don't say goodbye
love me but
don't love another
kiss me until tomorrow
hold me forever
need me for the rest of ur life
love me and kiss me and hope u know i wish this would never end
well i hope u all like it!!!
Good job! I love the poem. Very romantic. ^_^ Hope to see more!
Very cute and romantic, this poem nicely speaks of true love. Good work and hope to see more.^^
Very awesome play on words. I like it!
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
thanks i wrote it for my friend and her bf. she wanted a way to tell him she loved but with no physical contact. so she asked to write a peom about them. soo yea.. thanks again for the replies and yes i will be writing more!
Keep up the writing. While unpolished the sentiment and feeling in this poem is absolutely adorible. I like it a lot. It made me smile and I'm a cynic.
I think it is a really nice poem i thouhg tit really sounded really nice and meant something