Thread: the knight of light

That was beautiful. I can just imagine the scene with the knight. I love it! Keep up the good work!

OOoooOOOooOOO! ^^ Such a catchy title already!

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Originally Posted by ryomakurosaki

His tender looks comes more clear
He awakes and grabs me
kisses my lips and makes me feel safe but
also make me wonder about his love for me..

Since i let him in
my dark sky turn clear,
the darkness in my heart goes away
he became my knight of light and
the prince of my world..

How romantic of you oneechan! ^^ You'll always be a pro with these poems. I like this poem like your others cause they mostly deal with love. ^^ Plus it always has a great flow to me when I read it as well. Hope to see another ok!

Originally Posted by Priestess Angel

That was beautiful. I can just imagine the scene with the knight. I love it! Keep up the good work!

thank you^^ i am told i have a good sense of imaginary in my writing ^^ and am glad you enjoyed the poem^^ i wished i had more details in my poem though but i guess it is still good without all that ^^

Originally Posted by KuwiRules145

OOoooOOOooOOO! ^^ Such a catchy title already!

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How romantic of you oneechan! ^^ You'll always be a pro with these poems. I like this poem like your others cause they mostly deal with love. ^^ Plus it always has a great flow to me when I read it as well. Hope to see another ok!

lol thank you kuwi^^ i am glad my writing is the type you like^^ yea i am ok with writing about love. yea i liked those parts as well.
i am glad it had a good flow because i don't want people getting tangled within the poem^^

again thank you guys for the wonderful comments^^

nice love poem indeed ... the parts that were vague and obscure played their role well ... it's not always the clear poems that takes the first place ... that's what i think ..