Thread: Knives, Pens, Swords and Guns.

Originally Posted by atomik_sprout

Run at me! I want you to!
You know that I'm not scared of you!
Look at me--listen here!!
Why'd you steal what I held dear?!

WTF? You think it's fun?
To see me suffer in front of everyone?!
I know you--I know your plan.
You think your actions make you a better man?

I'm not playin' second fiddle!
I won't let you have your way.
So act like nothing's wrong,
then my sword can come to play!

I wish you would dissapear!
God dammit--Just go away!
Because every time you're near,
I feel like I must make you pay!

Even in my own home,
you make me want to leave.
Tell me why when you arrive
it's hard for me to breathe!

I tried to be your friend.
Hell, I even tried to use tact.
But when you come around,
I still feel the knife in my back.

The pen is mighter than the sword.
The sword is mightier than the gun.
If you ever use that gun around her,
My sword will have it's fun...

holy hell i love it utterly love it im gonna have to meat you in person someday maybe have a swordfighting contest lol best lines
I'm not playin' second fiddle!
I won't let you have your way.
So act like nothing's wrong,
then my sword can come to play!

Originally Posted by levitatinganimelover

holy hell i love it utterly love it im gonna have to meat you in person someday maybe have a swordfighting contest lol best lines
I'm not playin' second fiddle!
I won't let you have your way.
So act like nothing's wrong,
then my sword can come to play!

Man, I'm gonna have to add you to my network. You're such an ego booster for me, LOL. ^_^ J/K

On a serious note, I really do appreciate the time you take to read my poems. I'm glad you like them. Thanks a bunch! ^_^

lol add me i would love to be in your network lol even though this may come out homosexual like (not meant to be) i would spend all my time reading you poems

I donno why yout hought this would make anyone upset or anything. It's really well written and extremely wellf elt! I like it a lot. It's good.

Originally Posted by bratling

I donno why yout hought this would make anyone upset or anything. It's really well written and extremely wellf elt! I like it a lot. It's good.

I dunno. I guess it's because I believe that words can be more harsh than anything else on the planet. A fist will leave a temporary bruise, but words are forever. I guess I'm weird like that.

I'm glad you like it, at least. ^_^ That took a lot of weight off my shoulders.

I do agree with the power of words. But at the same time...words don't always convey true thought or feeling. Words are easy to fake. Not saying that these aren't sincere at all, just playing devils advocate.