Knotarapper

*atomik_sprout* · Jul 13, 2007, 02:17 PM

I am not a rapper,
I'm a B-Boy, yo!
You can tell by my poetry
that I love to flow.

You can catch me on the
block walkin' in my AF-1's,
freestylin' to the beat,
as I walk toward the sun.

It gives me inspiration
to write sharp as a knife.
And it keeps my mind off
of the daily hassles in my life.

I can beat-box too!
Ask anyone I know.
Music's not just art, it's
a part of life--so...

Come with me on a
quest to save hip-hop!
Because all this talk about
spinnin' rims needs to stop! >_<

KNOTARAPPER!

I say again, I'm not a rapper, man.
I ain't a pusher, nor a ganster,
I don't keep guns in hand.

I'm just a man who likes
to break beats and bust rhymes.
Just a man who likes to
draw and write poems sometimes.

Just a dude who's tired of
the "SHOULDER LEEAAN!!"
And the guys in the videos
who be LOOKIN' MEAN.

*Every thing in caps i was singing to myself. That's why they're in caps, LOL. I hope you like it. It's the first time I've ever written a poem to be rap-like and not the other way around*

*Lasura* · Jul 13, 2007, 02:23 PM

lol ^^ it's cool... very cool ^^ I didn't think I can enjoy reading something like this that much... very cool indeed... cought my atention a lot and you even managed to make me read it in rythm... very cool

A great work her Sprout!!! ^^ Something much different from what I've EVER read, but very cool... Really enjoyed reading it... but now I'm starting to go in circles and say the same thing again and again ^^

*atomik_sprout* · Jul 13, 2007, 02:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lasura

lol ^^ it's cool... very cool ^^ I didn't think I can enjoy reading something like this that much... very cool indeed... cought my atention a lot and you even managed to make me read it in rythm... very cool

A great work her Sprout!!! ^^ Something much different from what I've EVER read, but very cool... Really enjoyed reading it... but now I'm starting to go in circles and say the same thing again and again ^^

Thanks! I didn't think that anyone would like it as much as I did. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it so much. Maybe I should write more like this?

*Lasura* · Jul 13, 2007, 02:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by atomik_sprout

Thanks! I didn't think that anyone would like it as much as I did. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it so much. Maybe I should write more like this?

Yea... I think you should ^^ I really like it a lot... and it's something much different from anything that is in this Poem section- variety is always a good thing...

*Peach_follows* · Jul 15, 2007, 07:05 AM

Knotarapper?.... How 'bout this... KnotaWrapper...REMIX

Im knotawrapper of a damn now-and-later.
Now-and-later's got more desguises than space invaders.
I'm not the piece of paper that sticks out where it twists,
At the top of the foil wrapped around a hershey kiss.
I didn't package any of the food that sits on your table.
I'm not a freakin' wrapper... So don't give me a label.

*atomik_sprout* · Jul 16, 2007, 07:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Peach_follows

Knotarapper?.... How 'bout this... KnotaWrapper...REMIX

Im knotawrapper of a damn now-and-later.
Now-and-later's got more desguises than space invaders.
I'm not the piece of paper that sticks out where it twists,
At the top of the foil wrapped around a hershey kiss.
I didn't package any of the food that sits on your table.
I'm not a freakin' wrapper... So don't give me a label.

REMIIIIIIIIIX!!! DJ CLUE...clue, clue... EXCLUSIVE...ive, ive... LOL!

Thanks for the comment/input/re-write, Peach. ^_^

Jul 13, 2007, 02:17 PM	#1 (permalink)
atomik_sprout CHUCK NORRIS!!! Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 2,087 Thanks: 55 Thanked 69 Times in 64 Posts Credits: 110,749	Knotarapper I am not a rapper, I'm a B-Boy, yo! You can tell by my poetry that I love to flow. You can catch me on the block walkin' in my AF-1's, freestylin' to the beat, as I walk toward the sun. It gives me inspiration to write sharp as a knife. And it keeps my mind off of the daily hassles in my life. I can beat-box too! Ask anyone I know. Music's not just art, it's a part of life--so... Come with me on a quest to save hip-hop! Because all this talk about spinnin' rims needs to stop! >_< KNOTARAPPER! I say again, I'm not a rapper, man. I ain't a pusher, nor a ganster, I don't keep guns in hand. I'm just a man who likes to break beats and bust rhymes. Just a man who likes to draw and write poems sometimes. Just a dude who's tired of the "SHOULDER LEEAAN!!" And the guys in the videos who be LOOKIN' MEAN. Every thing in caps i was singing to myself. That's why they're in caps, LOL. I hope you like it. It's the first time I've ever written a poem to be rap-like and not the other way around __________________ http://www.myspace.com/boondocksamurai Last edited by atomik_sprout; Jul 13, 2007 at 02:18 PM. Reason: Hukt on fonix wurkt 4 meee!! >_<
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Jul 13, 2007, 02:23 PM	#2 (permalink)
Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,866 Thanks: 56 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts Credits: 49,192	Re: Knotarapper lol ^^ it's cool... very cool ^^ I didn't think I can enjoy reading something like this that much... very cool indeed... cought my atention a lot and you even managed to make me read it in rythm... very cool A great work her Sprout!!! ^^ Something much different from what I've EVER read, but very cool... Really enjoyed reading it... but now I'm starting to go in circles and say the same thing again and again ^^ __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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Jul 15, 2007, 07:05 AM	#5 (permalink)
Peach_follows Femmebot's feel nothing. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley Posts: 1,026 Thanks: 42 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts Credits: 2,215	Re: Knotarapper Knotarapper?.... How 'bout this... KnotaWrapper...REMIX Im knotawrapper of a damn now-and-later. Now-and-later's got more desguises than space invaders. I'm not the piece of paper that sticks out where it twists, At the top of the foil wrapped around a hershey kiss. I didn't package any of the food that sits on your table. I'm not a freakin' wrapper... So don't give me a label. __________________ Who needs a spray can, when you're a femmebot? http://www.myspace.com/j1gg481tt
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