I am not a rapper,
I'm a B-Boy, yo!
You can tell by my poetry
that I love to flow.
You can catch me on the
block walkin' in my AF-1's,
freestylin' to the beat,
as I walk toward the sun.
It gives me inspiration
to write sharp as a knife.
And it keeps my mind off
of the daily hassles in my life.
I can beat-box too!
Ask anyone I know.
Music's not just art, it's
a part of life--so...
Come with me on a
quest to save hip-hop!
Because all this talk about
spinnin' rims needs to stop! >_<
I say again, I'm not a rapper, man.
I ain't a pusher, nor a ganster,
I don't keep guns in hand.
I'm just a man who likes
to break beats and bust rhymes.
Just a man who likes to
draw and write poems sometimes.
Just a dude who's tired of
the "SHOULDER LEEAAN!!"
And the guys in the videos
who be LOOKIN' MEAN.
*Every thing in caps i was singing to myself. That's why they're in caps, LOL. I hope you like it. It's the first time I've ever written a poem to be rap-like and not the other way around*
Last edited by atomik_sprout; Jul 13, 2007 at 02:18 PM.
Reason: Hukt on fonix wurkt 4 meee!! >_<
lol ^^ it's cool... very cool ^^ I didn't think I can enjoy reading something like this that much... very cool indeed... cought my atention a lot and you even managed to make me read it in rythm... very cool
A great work her Sprout!!! ^^ Something much different from what I've EVER read, but very cool... Really enjoyed reading it... but now I'm starting to go in circles and say the same thing again and again ^^
Thanks! I didn't think that anyone would like it as much as I did. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it so much. Maybe I should write more like this?
Originally Posted by Lasura
Yea... I think you should ^^ I really like it a lot... and it's something much different from anything that is in this Poem section- variety is always a good thing...
Originally Posted by atomik_sprout
Knotarapper?.... How 'bout this... KnotaWrapper...REMIX
Im knotawrapper of a damn now-and-later.
Now-and-later's got more desguises than space invaders.
I'm not the piece of paper that sticks out where it twists,
At the top of the foil wrapped around a hershey kiss.
I didn't package any of the food that sits on your table.
I'm not a freakin' wrapper... So don't give me a label.
REMIIIIIIIIIX!!! DJ CLUE...clue, clue... EXCLUSIVE...ive, ive... LOL!
Originally Posted by Peach_follows
Thanks for the comment/input/re-write, Peach. ^_^