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    La Vida


    La vida es una carrera,
    Sabes cuando inicia pero no cuando termina;
    La vida es como un campo de batalla,
    No sabes si pierdes no sabes si ganas.
    La vida es como un universo,
    Nunca termina y no tiene comienzo;
    La vida es solamente prestada,
    Has algo hoy o mejor no hagas nada.

    La vida no es nada más que la vida,
    Tiene entrada pero no una salida.
    La vida es como el tiempo,
    El sigue corriendo pero nunca va lento;
    Pero si me preguntas que es la vida,
    Es algo de hoy no de mañana,
    Es algo hermoso,
    Pero que a veces te daña,
    Pero sobre todo,
    Es aquello que tú amas.

    Life

    Life is a race,
    You know when it begins, not when it ends.
    Life is like a battlefield,
    You don’t know if you’ll win or die on the field.
    Life is like a universe,
    It never ends and you cannot traverse.
    Life is barrowed,
    Do something today or live in woe.

    Life is just life,
    There is an entrance but no end to give.
    Life is like time,
    It runs it’s course, never slow or kind.
    It’s something of today, not of tomorrow,
    Its something beautiful that give you pleasure.
    It can be painful, but above it all,
    It is that which you love and treasure.

    This is the Spanish version. and there is the translation. Please comment.
    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

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    Re: La Vida (life)

    When I first saw the title of this poem I know its a poem doe!
    Well Jairo, good brief description of life.......You had a good point of life throughout the entire poem!
    Good poem! Jairo! Keep it up!
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: La Vida (life)

    thanks man... im glad u like it... Im trying to upload more. this is my myspace url...where u can read my blog.. there are more poems...

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    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

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