Land Of Mystery

dreaming saturn · Mar 29, 2007, 07:51 PM

Land of Mystery

Someway,
In the city of golden sand,
Mysteries filled the air,
From the early dawn,
Till the shadow of darkness passes by,
Till Isis become the Queen of night.
As the wind changes starts to blow,
Amon -- sits on his throne,
Watching the magnificant Pyramids,
And the great Sphinx,
Down beneath his kingdom of eternity.
The magnificant Pyramids,
An ancient and sacred tomb,
Of the mighty Pharaoh Khutu,
Prince of the sun,
King of Egypt.
The great Sphinx,
A monument of honour,
With the face of a man,
And the body of a beast,
Guarding the Pyramid,
From the touch of mankind,
Shall it be known?
As the land of Mystery?

*Rave_Grip* · Mar 30, 2007, 03:19 AM

Well that's something you don't see everyday. It's interesting enough and I like the imagery tech. good job ^_^

Lotski · Mar 30, 2007, 03:48 AM

that's nice! do you like egypt? hehehe..
ilike the place and i like you poem!
keep it up..

BlueFox1 · Mar 30, 2007, 03:53 AM

Great poem! I like the way you given this poem and egyptian feel! I love the way this poem flows! Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more your work in the near future!

dreaming saturn · Mar 30, 2007, 08:10 PM

Thanks Rave_Grip, Lotski and BlueFox1.

Lotski, I like to see the Pyramids and the Sphinx in Egypt, but I know I can't and won't go there. I like some film showing the scenery of Egypt and I saw movie 'The Mummy' and 'Mummy 2' ...

*Kasai* · Apr 02, 2007, 11:46 AM

I believe there was a typo. Khutu should be Khufu?

dreaming saturn · Apr 06, 2007, 07:02 PM

Didn't noticed that ... read the poem again (carefully), but it doesn't matter now ...

JefferyXie · Apr 10, 2007, 01:47 AM

it is something different..not about emotion but about something that we can see with our eyes...that's great.

Mar 29, 2007, 07:51 PM	#1 (permalink)
dreaming saturn Newbie Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 10	Land Of Mystery Land of Mystery Someway, In the city of golden sand, Mysteries filled the air, From the early dawn, Till the shadow of darkness passes by, Till Isis become the Queen of night. As the wind changes starts to blow, Amon -- sits on his throne, Watching the magnificant Pyramids, And the great Sphinx, Down beneath his kingdom of eternity. The magnificant Pyramids, An ancient and sacred tomb, Of the mighty Pharaoh Khutu, Prince of the sun, King of Egypt. The great Sphinx, A monument of honour, With the face of a man, And the body of a beast, Guarding the Pyramid, From the touch of mankind, Shall it be known? As the land of Mystery? Last edited by dreaming saturn; Mar 29, 2007 at 10:00 PM.
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Mar 30, 2007, 03:19 AM	#2 (permalink)
Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,313 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 14,467	Re: Land Of Mystery Well that's something you don't see everyday. It's interesting enough and I like the imagery tech. good job ^_^ __________________ Wherever you see, there is always 98% of people who love something; and 2% that don't. I'm pretty sure that not ALL 98% of peeps don't support Lolita or anything. So if you agree, put it in your sig. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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Lotski Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Baguio City, Philippines Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 358	Re: Land Of Mystery that's nice! do you like egypt? hehehe.. ilike the place and i like you poem! keep it up.. __________________ Be d REASON for someone's happiness, NOT just part of it... Be a PART of someone's sadness, but NOT d reason for it.
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BlueFox1 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,156	Re: Land Of Mystery Great poem! I like the way you given this poem and egyptian feel! I love the way this poem flows! Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more your work in the near future! __________________
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dreaming saturn Newbie Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 10	Re: Land Of Mystery Thanks Rave_Grip, Lotski and BlueFox1. Lotski, I like to see the Pyramids and the Sphinx in Egypt, but I know I can't and won't go there. I like some film showing the scenery of Egypt and I saw movie 'The Mummy' and 'Mummy 2' ...
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Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,380	Re: Land Of Mystery I believe there was a typo. Khutu should be Khufu? __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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dreaming saturn Newbie Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 10	Re: Land Of Mystery Didn't noticed that ... read the poem again (carefully), but it doesn't matter now ...
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JefferyXie Shichibukai Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 613 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	Re: Land Of Mystery it is something different..not about emotion but about something that we can see with our eyes...that's great.
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