Nice and sad poem hope to see more. Smile for all.It was awesome in my way.
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i've been fooled by a man like you
you've given me great pain in my heart
seeing you go, it thought was better
better enough to erase you in my heart
but then again, feelings remained
a year has passed yet I still waited
just one smile and i'll be in heaven
just one glance and i'll reach the sky
been always waiting for that chance
to see you visit or to see you go again
i know that we'll never be together
but i just want to see you for the last time
I never thought that my wish had been heard
but that wish was a big mistake
i just did it again, broke my own heart
tears in my eyes poured down like heavy rain
it was unexpected yet it's very clear
clear to me, that you and she
my dearest friend has fallen inlove with you
you won the prize that's why i'm so blue
I had stopped crying and i thought i did
but when i saw you, hell i'm a freak
i felt stupid wating for nothing
everything crumbled and broke into pieces
another year but no more tears
Finally, my love for you has ended
I'll take another step to move on
to leave you behind my past...at last
"Never tell a man that you love him until he has declared his undying love for you."
Nice and sad poem hope to see more. Smile for all.It was awesome in my way.
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「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Sweet poem it told the story of a broken heart very well. Keep up the good work.
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Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
Sad poem, just like a typical breakup but in the end you did a nice job explaining everything. Very good!
But hey! I got my 2000th post in your poem! xD
This is a wonderful poem... I really like it!!! It's wonderful how you express your feelings, I even feel a little bit of anvy (in a good way)I felt for the lyrical "me" with all my heart and I was truly happy to read the last stanza where she says that she's over it... It expresses some of my feelings... Wonderful!
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What a sad and sweet poem. You are a great poet. Hope to see more from you.
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